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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

Suitcase sits In golden grass She was hit She ran so fast Get away She thought, inside Nearby, she rests where she lays Heidi Sands 9/5/17 *Placed 5th in the Whitney-2 Contest.

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 9:21:00 AM

Heidi, you've written a song of sorrow. Running away from a bad situation in hope of a better tomorrow only to have a twist of fate destroy her dream. Nicely done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 9:32:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment on this James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/16/2017 9:09:00 AM

Your words set our imagination working, Heidi! Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2017 9:10:00 AM

Thank you , Paul :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/12/2017 1:41:00 AM

Congratulations, Heidi for placement.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thank you Subimal :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:54:00 PM

Back to Congratulate you, Heidi, Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 7:01:00 AM

Thank you, Eve :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:04:00 PM

Congrats!!! Heidi on a beautiful write and win...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 6:21:00 PM

Thank you WW :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2017 12:51:00 PM

Congrats Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Jack :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 11:56:00 AM

melancholic, heidi, well written... best congrats on your award and thanks for coming by...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Nette :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2017 9:19:00 PM

I love this poem, Heidi, luck in the contest..... Hugs Eve ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/7/2017 9:23:00 PM

I am happy to hear that Eve. Thank you :)

Silent One

Date: 9/6/2017 8:24:00 AM

Nice write for the contest Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/6/2017 7:23:00 AM

Nice reflections with impressive images ...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2017 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Probir :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2017 5:07:00 AM

This write is very powerful and has great imagery, something that Nette will love reading! I foresee high marks for this incredible poem! I surely loved reading this tremendous poem this morning, what a glorious piece, Great Work my friend!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2017 5:14:00 AM

Thank you for the positive feedback. Nice to see you at the site today and to read your pleasant comments :)