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Whitney 2--Conquest

Backpacking I search my truth place unknown— With abandon limbs roam free on brown pampas, thirsting for newfound conquests. Contest: Whitney 2 5 Sept 2017

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 8:56:00 AM

Carly, a lovely sentiment in your work, Enjoy the journey and the destination will take care of itself.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carly hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:13:00 PM

Congrats!!! Carly on your beautiful Win!!!...god bless...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/11/2017 6:08:00 PM

Congrats on this fine piece, Carly!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2017 5:35:00 PM

Great poem, Carly. Congrats on the win

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2017 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations Carly :)

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations! makes me want to see the rest of the journey!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 10:47:00 AM

now this whitney is incredible: tying in a 'search', 'backpacking',' abandon', 'pampas', 'conquests' created a visual, emotional image in a solid manner... congrats on your win, and thanks for joining.. huggs