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Whitney2 - Crossroads

WHITNEY2 - CROSSROADS Runaway’s suitcase, halts, in gold dust grain - heaven’s crossroads. Decision paused, as her mom prays, under the same bold rays. Whitney2 Poetry Contest 9/5/2017

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 9:24:00 AM

A wonderfully conceived piece Kim. The layout separating two sides of the same coin.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2017 12:52:00 PM

Thank you, James!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/12/2017 1:43:00 AM

Congratulations, Kim on placement.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kim, Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 6:19:00 AM

Thanks, Eve!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:25:00 PM

Congrats!!! Kim...great write my friend...god bless and stay safe...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 6:20:00 AM

Thanks, WW!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2017 5:45:00 PM

Kim, EXCELLENTLY conceived poem on that picture prompt she gave us. Congrats to you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2017 12:52:00 PM

Congrats Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 1:23:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay!

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:44:00 PM

Woooow! This is really lovely! I love how you show two different halves of a human conflict/story, seperated but connected by the light. This is such an artful depiction of Higher Power that is accessible to so many different faiths. Very open for the reader to occupy. Love it. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 1:23:00 PM

Thanks, Jack!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 12:00:00 PM

compelling write delivered like a haiku, kim...congrats on garnering a placement and thanks for joining this contest.. huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 12:36:00 PM

Thanks, Nette! Xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2017 5:37:00 PM

Excellent use of imagery. She should really appreciate that in her contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 5:52:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! <3

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2017 4:19:00 AM

Wow!This poem is so much better than mine Kim! You will surely place much higher than mine...if I place at all! In fact, I believe your poem deserves a first place placement, it is that good! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! Your format is very well thought out, and masterfully done! Great Work!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 7:10:00 AM

Russell, thank you so much! <3 Kim

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/5/2017 11:26:00 AM

Beautiful presentation--scene well depicted--lovely Kim! Good luck!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 12:26:00 PM

Thank you!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2017 10:24:00 AM

Very good Kim! Good luck in the contest :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 10:26:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi :)