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countless snowflakes fall more whip back up ~ only the wind is visible

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/14/2022 6:57:00 PM

David, you have grasped the essence of the occasion very well in this snapshot. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/15/2022 1:12:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad, not my normal type of form, I’m more a traditionalist on the haikus, but hey I always like to try something new, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/14/2022 3:33:00 PM

You evoke a wily winter's day....I think this will be a winner in the contest! :) Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2022 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Paulette, I enjoyed putting this one together, some of my other stuff can make difficult reading, but hey it’s just how I see reality, cheers David