White Wine Emparado Sun Shine ( 2007 )

White Wine Emparado Sun Shine ( 2007 )

The frosted glass
Trickles in the shade
Little rivulet’s marking times smiling
Hazy cool sips
Of the second bottle
Shared with talk and laughter
While Costa Del Blanca heat
Bakes the dust devils
Dancing at the seas edge

Shared bread of the day
Tuna olives and jalapenos
Spell their twang
While giggling on some silly joke

Its smells like goats cheese
And tasty trinkets of fishy squid
Cold crisp vino blanco
Hazy cool sipped
Of the third bottle
Cork’s popped

Tourist frying in sun tan oil
Unaware of the benefits of shadow

We kick back
Souls replenishing in lazy skies
Friend filled eyes
Enjoy the silence of company
Lilting with Spanish guitars
And the dusky Arab “looky looky” man plies his wares

The sleepy heady slows
Bodies stretch comfortable with tans
And cigarette smoke
Drifts hours to the soft washing
Sighing Mediterranean salt

Away for the duration
Left back somewhere the cold chill
And rain of England’s
Dismal lowered damp grey
Shrugged from these shoulders
And forgotten

We kick back
Any further back would lead to snoring

Souls replenishing in lazy blue skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/23/2009 3:00:00 AM
LOVE those last 3 lines...and the last few verses especially. I have always wanted to go to England, and one day, I shall, and soak it all in. lovely expression Colin, love, Kristin P.S-your rose madder poem was amazing and well deserved my friend. ;)
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Date: 1/22/2009 10:48:00 AM
Oh man, if this isn't the closest thing to a vacation feeling I don't know what is. Transported, relaxed - no soooo mellow, it is blue sky, wine and sea, heaven. Thanks for the mini vacation, what a read. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:14:00 AM
This poem of yours I've read more than once. I thoroughly admire how it holds together, while the reader follows throughout. Thanks. Jan
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