White Petals Fell


POTD : 12.2.26
First Placing: Standard Contest
Sponsor : JCB Brul

Daisies could not bloom bound by debt of Time
we tried to unknot ropes tied across dimes 
by deeds proceeding of their own accord
songs not written by either of us unfree
as white petals fell dropping one by one

Hours of tasting, smelling, touching lost 
on battlefields, in barracks when away 
you had to haste with epaulettes torn
I rooted a chasing escape, sweat dripping 
tied to wheat fields watching babes chaste

Bald eagles soared above winelands stolen 
gulls and albatross escorted galleon laden with longing ~ South to North, winds gushing 
your wishes driven by wrenching penalties 
seals then oceans carried lips and knees 

Your breastbone turned from an unborn world
too pregnant in fluid womb of clocks chiming 
fled you from aching loss of Love’s caged raging 
stoic in withholding fist of sacrifice, away you got 
drowning throbbing Heart in my own bleeding

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M  Avatar
February 18, 2026 at 4:41 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Ghairo for such a heart rendering moving poem! Debx
Daniels Avatar
February 18, 2026 at 8:19 AM
ThkU for visit & read, Deb M. Great Love.
Hind Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 9:30 PM
Belated congrats on POTD!!!
May Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 5:08 PM
"Gulls and albatross escorted galleon laden with longing", Very nicely penned
Daniels Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 5:42 PM
ThkU for visit & comment, Joseph. B blessed.
Rodgers Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 7:34 AM
Dear Ghairo, Congrats on POTD! what a large emotional canvas with war, separation, debt (temporal and financial), longing, national imagery, bodily memory, and sacrifice. Quite the epic-lyric. A lot of energy flowing! Winter Blessings, Dear Ghairo, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 3:08 PM
ThkU for comment, Sir Poet. Yeah, releasing. X.
Nicole Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:26 PM
' songs not written by either of us. ' In life, our story sweetly unfolds the day we are born and continues to so, until death. Our Creator certainly set everything in motion, and I find that so awe inspiring. Congratulations Ghairo, on Poem of the Day. Hugs and blessings, my dear friend. ~ Brandy
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:42 PM
ThkU for visit & comment, Brady. I appreciate. To extend to your perspective, our stories continue to unfold after Death, in another form. Have a blessed week. Great Love.
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations lovely sweet Ghairo on your POTD! Have a wonderful day ~ AA
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:24 PM
ThkU Dearest AA. May Ancient Egypt & the Pyramids continue to inspire us. I respect your attention to my page. Hugs. X.
Anaya Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 5:12 PM
Sweet Ghairo, Congratulations on POTD, lineage Or ancestry awakens the souls of the past. slave, warrior, master. A moving piece. xXHugs
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:30 PM
Dear Anaya ~ There’s something about “blood & family do not take one to the Kingdom of God”. Can’t remember where I read it. Could be Bible. Remember Soul has no blood. Though I agree lineage & ancestry helps with Awakening Process. Merci for comment, Dear One.
La France Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 1:10 PM
Ghairo, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY, honor ~
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:32 PM
Constance, ThkU for visit & comment. ~
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "White Petals Fell" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:30 AM
ThkU Paula. Hugs. X.
Seeker Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 7:09 AM
An intriguing poem, I’m not sure if I grasped it fully, yet enjoyed the read, drenched with purpose of a ‘drowning throbbing heart bleeding’. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Ghairo.
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:30 AM
Oh Wow, Unseeking ! This is the first ever comment I received from you since I started using this site. So I’ll reciprocate by entering your current contest. Lol. Sending blessings.
Bayles Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on POTD.
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:26 AM
ThkU for read, Mike. I appreciate. X.
Cunningham Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 5:30 AM
An enjoyable and thought provoking verse Ghairo, congratulations for today's POTD honour. Tom
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:25 AM
ThkU for comment Tom. I appreciate your visit. X.
Kitchin Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 5:23 AM
Ghairo, well penned, congratulations on POTD.
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:24 AM
ThkU for read, Tania. What I like about POTD poems are that they are always surprises. X.
Jones Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 1:03 AM
Wow! Very well put together! Congratulations on potd!
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:22 AM
ThkU for visit, Karen. I appreciate your time & read. Xx.
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February 12, 2026 at 12:56 AM
Touching poetry Ghairo, congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl
Daniels Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:21 AM
ThkU for visit, Beryl. A nice surprise for me. X
Hind Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 2:34 PM
This is so very moving, Ghairo. My eyes are moisting. It's beautiful. In my favs
Daniels Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 2:55 PM
ThkU for read & comment, Paige. Past lives to fore. Xx.
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