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Vichy
 

White Invisible Trains Part1

Ice stiffened limbs
Reaching out
No saviors about

Snow flakes in the wind
I reached and reached and reached
Towards deaths cold hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roberts Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:27 PM
hmmm what I wonder will follow....Seren
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Leaves an eerie feeling, can't wait for part deux
Krampe Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:36 AM
The imagery in your poem evokes an atmosphere of desolation. I like it.
Michael Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 4:55 AM
The imagery is clear...I could feel the inner coldness right here...All the best Arthur
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