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Gurs

White Invisible Tracks

Never to see her again
I looked down
Wine of bloods holo

Flowing from my hands
Unto the devils abode
Whitest of Pyrenees days
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roberts Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:31 PM
now I know what follows...its different...Seren
Smith Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:29 PM
A very sad feel, stolen away to never return
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:35 PM
the title may be white but I found the imagery deep and dark Arthur. hugs Jan xx
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