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1467 Poetry Contest
Sponsor Brian Strand
8th Place

WHITE FLOWER & BROWN BUTTERFLY watercolor by Anaya

White Flower, Brown Butterfly

There are pearly white flowers 
that delicately sway
mimicking tiny dancing butterflies
within the lacy shrubs sector
breeze blown away
blooms of heaven-sent nectar
an attraction, an invitation
A meadow brown butterfly swarms to
its empowering rich white petals
resting, buckled, uncoiled tongue, sucking 
scaled wings clasped, it settles
stupefied by scents, it feeds
bewildered by sugary sucrose
ideal prey for a spider’s capture
in its ampullate silk orb web
sticky droplets woven to ensnare
Asclepias incarnata, magnets for pollinators
Ice-ballet swamp milkweeds
amongst igneous rocks banding from foliation 
rocks formed from cooled magma 
gravy tones, an obsidian correlation
where white flowers string 
In  a  momentums  gain, 
a brown butterfly takes wing
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Legros Kelley Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 6:32 PM
Beautiful uplifting poem and painting Anaya! I see it won a contest, so AWESOME! <3 :)
Anaya Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 11:23 AM
Tyvm, Bj! :)
Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:07 PM
gorgeous writing- !!!!!!!!!!!!! and your painting, wow, Anaya, you are so gifted a person, and congrats <3
Anaya Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 11:22 AM
Paige, Tyvm! <3
Jones Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 12:37 AM
Back to say congratulations on your win!
Anaya Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Ah, tyvm for your return & ac olades!
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 10:06 PM
Very well written. Big congrats on your win
Anaya Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 11:56 AM
Andrea, pleased you thought so. Blessings
Narain Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Nice poem. Great imagery.
Anaya Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 11:57 AM
:D
Jones Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Your butterfly poem is delightful! You know I love your art!!!
Anaya Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 11:57 AM
:D
Buhagiar Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 1:31 AM
A magnificent poem with well-chosen words. At least, we do see butterflies in Malta.
Anaya Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 8:51 AM
My heartfelt thanks for the kind thoughts, Victor. Smiling at the fact. Blessings ~
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