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White Cloud

across the blue sky

    an envoy of hope and peace

         a white cloud sails by

peacehaiku

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Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 8/21/2014 8:14:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Paul...You nailed it, as usual! Takes me back to those days when I'd lay on the grass watching the clouds go by...Perfect imagery :) Ana

Paul Callus
Date: 8/21/2014 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Ana; you are sweet and kind! I still find time for cloud-watching, believe it or not; I do it with my granddaughter and we get lots of fun out of it...relaxing and inspiring. /x/ paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/19/2014 1:46:00 AM

Wow! A haiku with depth and meaning. If only a cloud could be an "envoy of hope and peace." We poets are dreamers. We see so many things in the clouds. Bless you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 8/19/2014 8:34:00 AM

Good day to you Carolyn! Still trying to answer my mail, but it keeps increasing instead of decreasing!! ... and my internet is so very slow! Glad you like my tiny haiku; clouds will always fascinate me...even looking at their shapes makes for a lovely pastime (Valentina enjoys that, and she wrote a small poem about clouds too.) Love & Peace ...... paul

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/5/2014 9:34:00 AM

Now that's my kinda Haiku Paul...A simple observation turned into 'an envoy of hope and peace'...VERY well done sir! -Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 8/5/2014 12:17:00 PM

Hi Tim! Trying to catch up with a backlog of mail and new poems. So glad you enjoyed this short write of mine. I see you have been busy serenading the ladies!:) // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/4/2014 3:47:00 PM

Oh this is so clever,,really like...

Paul Callus
Date: 8/4/2014 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Harry; glad you liked/enjoyed this little haiku. cu around. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2014 6:21:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku !!! - Back from your vacation Paul ? - Have a great day ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/4/2014 4:04:00 PM

Thank you...glad you enjoyed this short contribution. No!!still here busy doing proof-reading. I will be going on holiday Saturday night; 4 days in Paris and 3 days EuroDisney (granddaughter's treat!) After that I'll be needing another good rest!:) /x/ paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2014 9:15:00 AM

Very descriptive work..I hope that all who are fighting see the peace sign..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2014 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Sara. At first glance evil seems to be on the winning side, but I believe that good can never be a loser. Peace to you too. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/2/2014 4:18:00 AM

Wow peace and serenity ! thats ur lovely haiku Paul !

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2014 6:59:00 AM

So glad my cloud message was delivered to you, too, Upma! May you find peace and serenity in life. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/1/2014 11:56:00 PM

This is wonderful - I love it. Happy writing and God bless you.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2014 6:51:00 AM

Thank you Regina, both for the visit and the 'like'! Have a lovely weekend and God bless. // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2014 9:08:00 PM

A shining example of a poet's mind casting out a soothing image!!! You got it right.....

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2014 6:47:00 AM

Glad you are with me on this one, Robert! Thank you for stopping by with your welcome comments. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/1/2014 7:30:00 PM

What a beautiful thought...I love it. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2014 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Barbara. This is a bearer of peace, not like my mushroom cloud. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/1/2014 6:43:00 PM

it seems we are on same thinking of calmness and pureness.. :) love it Paul. :) weeee.. might as well check mine.. :D

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2014 5:47:00 AM

am glad to see that you are calm, considering that in the next 24 hrs your heart will be racing!:) Wish you all the best, including a pleasant journey home!! Take care and God bless you:) Hugs ... paul

Tim Smith

Date: 8/1/2014 6:01:00 PM

You Haiku's have been so vibrant Paul...outstanding...Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 8/1/2014 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Tim; I quite enjoyed your 'vibrant' comments, my friend! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/1/2014 5:47:00 PM

wonderful imagery in this lovely Haiku Paul. Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 8/1/2014 6:01:00 PM

Many thanks, Jan. This one is meant to compliment and somewhat balance the previous haiku "Cloud". Not all is gloom and doom! We must live in hope of better things to come; it's our only chance. /x/ paul

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