Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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White Christmas

I'm dreaming of you this Christmas,
And the ones of yesteryears,
When the snow was falling,
And we were kissing,
And I had no need for tears.

I'm dreaming of you this Christmas,
With every decoration I hang,
Dreaming of the carols we sang,
At our wedding when bells rang.

I'm dreaming of you this Christmas,
And the ones of yesteryears,
When the snow was falling,
And we were kissing,
And I had no need for tears.

I'm dreaming of you this Christmas,
With every decoration I hang,
Dreaming of the carols we sang,
At our wedding when bells rang.

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November 29, 2015

Rhyme

Inspired by the song, White Christmas

For the contest, Christmas Carols, sponsor, Kelly Deschler

Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A January 7, 2016 at 11:06 PM BROKEN, Congrats on your Christmas win. ~LINDA~ Constance La France January 7, 2016 at 11:31 PM Linda, thanks for the congrats ~

Janice Canerdy January 5, 2016 at 8:24 AM This is bittersweet and lovely. Congratulations on your win. Janice Constance La France January 6, 2016 at 12:41 AM Janice, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations !

Dan Cwiak January 4, 2016 at 4:51 PM Nicely done, B W. That is the way to start the New Year, with a winner. Congratulations and Happy New Year to you! Constance La France January 5, 2016 at 2:15 AM Dan, thanks for visiting my poem with that nice comment and the congratulations and happy new year to you also...

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 10:42 AM Broken, congrats on your Christmas Carol. SKAT :) Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 1:03 PM Thank you Skat

Edward Ebbs January 3, 2016 at 4:24 PM Broken, great job, congrats! Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:32 AM Edward, thanks for the great and the congrats !

Jan Allison January 3, 2016 at 3:58 PM A delightful poem congrats on your win Broken Wings :-) hugs jan xx Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:32 AM Jan, thanks for the delightful and the congrats !

Eve Roper January 3, 2016 at 3:23 PM Broken Wing, I really enjoyed your wonderful poem : ) beautifully written! Congratulations on your win! Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:33 AM Eve, thanks for the wonderful the beautifully and the congratulations !

Kelly Deschler January 3, 2016 at 1:49 PM I liked your more romantic interpretation of the song, White Christmas... Beautifully written and rhymed... Congrats on a win! Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:34 AM Kelly, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am very honored ~

Beautiful Scars January 3, 2016 at 1:37 PM Congrats on your win Broken Wings! I love the gentle flow you seem to always carry...*smiles* *congrats* -Luloo :) Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:35 AM Laura, thanks for the congrats, the love and the smiles !

James Inman December 3, 2015 at 9:15 AM Interesting BW. While I was reading your poem I thought to myself how the flow reminded me of Bing Crosby singing White Christmas. Nicely done. Constance La France December 3, 2015 at 3:04 PM James, thanks for the visit, well that's a good thing it reminds you of Bing and White Christmas, because that is what it is suppose to mimic.. lol

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2015 at 6:24 PM also melancholy. I love that in a good Christmas poem Constance La France December 2, 2015 at 9:10 PM I was surprised to find that White Christmas is just two verse repeated, it seemed to be so much more

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2015 at 6:23 PM very inspired by that song, Constance. You are full of the Christmas spirit here!! Constance La France December 2, 2015 at 9:09 PM Andrea, thanks for visiting, oh yes this year I have to spirit for sure~

Alexis Y. December 2, 2015 at 4:41 PM BW, this is such a sad and beautiful piece. You captured the essence of the song really well. Great job! Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis7 Constance La France December 2, 2015 at 9:11 PM Alexis, thanks for that nice comment and for the 7!

Sandra Haight December 2, 2015 at 4:02 PM Again, Broken Wings, so sad, but so lovely in the way you image your emotions to touch our hearts. All the best for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra Constance La France December 2, 2015 at 4:29 PM Sandra thanks for the lovely visit and the 7!

Cona Adams December 1, 2015 at 8:36 AM So sad when marriage ends. This is a lovely poem. Good luck in the contest! It's a seven for me. Constance La France December 1, 2015 at 12:40 PM Cona, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate

Thomas Martin November 30, 2015 at 6:45 PM Beautiful, Constance!! Lovely as the coming Christmas. Constance La France December 1, 2015 at 12:41 PM Thomas, thanks for visiting. I find Christmas a sad time of the year

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 30, 2015 at 2:28 AM BW, lovely lines.. ~OLive Eloisa =`) Constance La France November 30, 2015 at 9:34 AM Olive, thanks for the lovely ~

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2015 at 9:31 PM Beautiful! Constance La France November 30, 2015 at 9:35 AM Richard, I love the word beautiful ~

Beautiful Scars November 29, 2015 at 8:36 PM Perfect for the contest!! gl!! *smiles* Constance La France November 30, 2015 at 9:36 AM Thank you Laura