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White Christmas

How exhilarating to observe
All around the white snow as it swerved,
Around the towering dark fir trees,
That grew richly on slopes in the breeze.

Below a small farm provided heat
Food was plentiful so that friends would meet.

The scene soon stopped, but there was still hope,
I took my toy and shook the snow globe.

Snow fell. The crib lit.  I dreamt of a luscious feast.
It’s White Christmas again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Proxenos Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 1:25 AM
Snow globes have always fascinated me and I also have one and love shaking it so it stands next to the Christmas tree every year. I love Michael Buble's Christmas Show whose theme is always cozy, and Christmas decorations everywhere which always somehow or somewhere shows snow. He is one of My favorite singers and reminds me of a younger version of Frank Sinatra, both crooners. Wonderful poem my friend. Blessings Jennifer.
Tor Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Such a splendid description of the beauty of the Snow Glow reflecting the beauty of Christmas Victor. Splendid wording in describing the natural beauty inside the Snow Globe and the festivities of the farm. Thanks Victor for setting the mood for our Saviors birthday. God bless you my friend...
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 8:21 AM
Christmas is near and not too anxious for it to arrive, just different anymore. Good reading. Blessings my friend
Bayles Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 9:37 PM
A warm poem, Victor. I enjoyed the rhyme.
Williams Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 3:50 AM
Dear Victor this such a charming and nostalgic poem, evoking the warmth and magic of a White Christmas. The imagery of swirling snow, towering fir trees, and the cozy farm creates a serene and inviting winter wonderland. The clever transition to the snow globe adds a playful touch, blending reality with the dreamy simplicity of childhood imagination...Hugs
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 3:30 AM
what a delightful poem Victor. I had a snow globe as a child - am happy not to see snow for real - our little island grinds to a halt! hugs jan xx
George Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 1:58 AM
Happy to read this poem on the 1st of December, when we are entering the Christmas season, a season of joy and gaiety for not only Christians, but for all people of the world. Have a happy season ahead, dear Victor!
Buehler Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 2:58 PM
I love this festive, holiday poem and its accompanying music. Nicely composed, Victor.
Hind Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Lovely- I liked this metaphor :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Nostalgic and beautiful, Victor
Read Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Hi Victor, It's very seldom we get snow in London now days, although it would be nice. Enjoyed reading your poem and watching your video.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 9:40 AM
No snow in Malta. Rarely some hail.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 7:28 AM
How majestic! Hugs ~ Kim
Rodgers Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Dear Victor, Oh, the magic of a snowy landscape and the warmth of cherished memories. You transported me to a serene winter scene filled with wonder and nostalgia. Everything word perfectly encapsulates the childlike joy and innocence that comes with dreaming of a perfect Christmas. Such a delightful piece. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 6:00 AM
- If the snow gets here before Christmas ... I'll send it to you ... I'll do fine without it :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 4:27 AM
So beautiful dear victor, do you get snow there; would be lovely to have a snow globe, so magical and dreamy. Youv written as always a very descriptive and creative poem that stands out! Pleasure reading this, sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 3:59 AM
Love to see a bit of snow but we don't seem to get it until we'll into the new year, we can only hope. Hope you have a lovely weekend Victor. Tom
Rolland Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 3:29 AM
to the magnificent painting from the now globe, great inspiration, thanks poet, this is so creative yann
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November 30, 2024 at 2:00 AM
Dreaming of a white Christmas, a lovely seasonal poem Victor… Beryl
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