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How exhilarating to observe All around the white snow as it swerved, Around the towering dark fir trees, That grew richly on slopes in the breeze. Below a small farm provided heat Food was plentiful so that friends would meet. The scene soon stopped, but there was still hope, I took my toy and shook the snow globe. Snow fell. The crib lit. I dreamt of a luscious feast. It’s White Christmas again.

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Date: 12/4/2024 1:25:00 AM
Snow globes have always fascinated me and I also have one and love shaking it so it stands next to the Christmas tree every year. I love Michael Buble's Christmas Show whose theme is always cozy, and Christmas decorations everywhere which always somehow or somewhere shows snow. He is one of My favorite singers and reminds me of a younger version of Frank Sinatra, both crooners. Wonderful poem my friend. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 12/3/2024 7:09:00 PM
Such a splendid description of the beauty of the Snow Glow reflecting the beauty of Christmas Victor. Splendid wording in describing the natural beauty inside the Snow Globe and the festivities of the farm. Thanks Victor for setting the mood for our Saviors birthday. God bless you my friend...
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Date: 12/2/2024 8:21:00 AM
Christmas is near and not too anxious for it to arrive, just different anymore. Good reading. Blessings my friend
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:37:00 PM
A warm poem, Victor. I enjoyed the rhyme.
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Date: 12/1/2024 3:50:00 AM
Dear Victor this such a charming and nostalgic poem, evoking the warmth and magic of a White Christmas. The imagery of swirling snow, towering fir trees, and the cozy farm creates a serene and inviting winter wonderland. The clever transition to the snow globe adds a playful touch, blending reality with the dreamy simplicity of childhood imagination...Hugs
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Date: 12/1/2024 3:30:00 AM
what a delightful poem Victor. I had a snow globe as a child - am happy not to see snow for real - our little island grinds to a halt! hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2024 1:58:00 AM
Happy to read this poem on the 1st of December, when we are entering the Christmas season, a season of joy and gaiety for not only Christians, but for all people of the world. Have a happy season ahead, dear Victor!
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Date: 11/30/2024 2:58:00 PM
I love this festive, holiday poem and its accompanying music. Nicely composed, Victor.
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Date: 11/30/2024 12:00:00 PM
Lovely- I liked this metaphor :)
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Date: 11/30/2024 10:34:00 AM
Nostalgic and beautiful, Victor
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Date: 11/30/2024 8:39:00 AM
Hi Victor, It's very seldom we get snow in London now days, although it would be nice. Enjoyed reading your poem and watching your video.
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Date: 11/30/2024 9:40:00 AM
No snow in Malta. Rarely some hail.
Date: 11/30/2024 7:28:00 AM
How majestic! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 11/30/2024 6:41:00 AM
Dear Victor, Oh, the magic of a snowy landscape and the warmth of cherished memories. You transported me to a serene winter scene filled with wonder and nostalgia. Everything word perfectly encapsulates the childlike joy and innocence that comes with dreaming of a perfect Christmas. Such a delightful piece. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/30/2024 6:00:00 AM
- If the snow gets here before Christmas ... I'll send it to you ... I'll do fine without it :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
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Date: 11/30/2024 4:27:00 AM
So beautiful dear victor, do you get snow there; would be lovely to have a snow globe, so magical and dreamy. Youv written as always a very descriptive and creative poem that stands out! Pleasure reading this, sending you light always
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Date: 11/30/2024 3:59:00 AM
Love to see a bit of snow but we don't seem to get it until we'll into the new year, we can only hope. Hope you have a lovely weekend Victor. Tom
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Date: 11/30/2024 3:29:00 AM
to the magnificent painting from the now globe, great inspiration, thanks poet, this is so creative yann
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Date: 11/30/2024 2:00:00 AM
Dreaming of a white Christmas, a lovely seasonal poem Victor… Beryl
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