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White Chariots


Heavenly battle,
White cumulus chariots;
Attacking cold fronts.




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*for Raul's Nature's Best Contest

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Raul Moreno

October 6, 2009 at 12:40 PM

Best of luck in the next round with all three of your submissions...Raul

Robin L. Gass

September 30, 2009 at 5:59 AM

Congratulatiins on your triple play, Abe! This Haiku is beautiful. You paint lovely pictures with your pen! Good luck in the finals and my best to you always! Love, Robin

September 26, 2009 at 11:30 AM

Another honor for this well written poem! Congratulations on having three poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Jim Fish

September 26, 2009 at 8:27 AM

Hummmm... I saw the same thing yesterday. Just finished reading all three of your contest entries and am about to proceed to your listed work. Congrats on being a "3-fer" and hope to cross trails with you again soon. ~<><

James Marshall Goff

September 24, 2009 at 4:49 PM

congrats! Abe! good luck in the second round!... jim

James Fraser

September 24, 2009 at 12:21 PM

Abe, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James

Brian Strand

September 24, 2009 at 9:23 AM

Well done,Abe best wishes in the next rounds with your poems.Rgds Brian

James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 1:07 PM

One of the most clever Haiku's i have read, excellent seems such a tame tribute for this poem>>James

Brandee Augustus

June 28, 2009 at 9:39 AM

Very cool perspective on this poem. I think it's a pretty rockin' haiku, if I do say so my self. Brilliant!

Sue Mason

June 27, 2009 at 11:04 AM

Love the title here, Abe and this very special haiku !! Wonderful writing and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week. Congratulations and good luck in Raul's contest. This surely is a winner!!

June 25, 2009 at 3:10 PM

Congratulations on your second place finish in Raul's contest with this creative view. Keep up the good writing. Enjoy your award. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 25, 2009 at 11:08 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Abe. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

June 25, 2009 at 10:53 AM

Congratulations Abe, on your haiku being featured. Vince

Brian Strand

June 24, 2009 at 11:49 PM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe .Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

June 24, 2009 at 8:45 PM

love this haiku! Abe! great win! jim

Carrie Richards

June 24, 2009 at 4:46 PM

Wonderful poem, Wonderful win, Abe!! Congratulations!!! ~ Love, Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

June 24, 2009 at 4:02 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! Love the second line! ~Trudy~

Barbara Gorelick

June 24, 2009 at 3:11 PM

Abe, this is wonderful..congrats on your win. Love, Barbara

Raul Moreno

June 24, 2009 at 2:06 PM

Abe, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Ernilando Tugaff

June 23, 2009 at 1:10 PM

Congratulations for this inspiring Haiku. Ernilando

Carrie Richards

June 23, 2009 at 8:39 AM

Stopping by to congratulate you for this wonderful haiku!! Well deserving to be among the featured works! ~ Carrie

June 22, 2009 at 2:19 PM

Abe, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

June 22, 2009 at 2:00 PM

this is haiku is simply beautiful.

Michael Jordan

June 22, 2009 at 7:03 AM

Abe - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ