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White Chariots


Heavenly battle,
White cumulus chariots;
Attacking cold fronts.




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*for Raul's Nature's Best Contest

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Raul Moreno

Date: 10/6/2009 12:40:00 PM

Best of luck in the next round with all three of your submissions...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/30/2009 5:59:00 AM

Congratulatiins on your triple play, Abe! This Haiku is beautiful. You paint lovely pictures with your pen! Good luck in the finals and my best to you always! Love, Robin

Date: 9/26/2009 11:30:00 AM

Another honor for this well written poem! Congratulations on having three poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Jim Fish

Date: 9/26/2009 8:27:00 AM

Hummmm... I saw the same thing yesterday. Just finished reading all three of your contest entries and am about to proceed to your listed work. Congrats on being a "3-fer" and hope to cross trails with you again soon. ~<><

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/24/2009 4:49:00 PM

congrats! Abe! good luck in the second round!... jim

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2009 12:21:00 PM

Abe, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 9/24/2009 9:23:00 AM

Well done,Abe best wishes in the next rounds with your poems.Rgds Brian

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:07:00 PM

One of the most clever Haiku's i have read, excellent seems such a tame tribute for this poem>>James

Brandee Augustus

Date: 6/28/2009 9:39:00 AM

Very cool perspective on this poem. I think it's a pretty rockin' haiku, if I do say so my self. Brilliant!

Sue Mason

Date: 6/27/2009 11:04:00 AM

Love the title here, Abe and this very special haiku !! Wonderful writing and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week. Congratulations and good luck in Raul's contest. This surely is a winner!!

Date: 6/25/2009 3:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your second place finish in Raul's contest with this creative view. Keep up the good writing. Enjoy your award. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2009 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Abe. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/25/2009 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations Abe, on your haiku being featured. Vince

Brian Strand

Date: 6/24/2009 11:49:00 PM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe .Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/24/2009 8:45:00 PM

love this haiku! Abe! great win! jim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/24/2009 4:46:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Wonderful win, Abe!! Congratulations!!! ~ Love, Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/24/2009 4:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! Love the second line! ~Trudy~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/24/2009 3:11:00 PM

Abe, this is wonderful..congrats on your win. Love, Barbara

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/24/2009 2:06:00 PM

Abe, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/23/2009 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations for this inspiring Haiku. Ernilando

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/23/2009 8:39:00 AM

Stopping by to congratulate you for this wonderful haiku!! Well deserving to be among the featured works! ~ Carrie

Date: 6/22/2009 2:19:00 PM

Abe, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 6/22/2009 2:00:00 PM

this is haiku is simply beautiful.

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/22/2009 7:03:00 AM

Abe - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ