Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Quatern

Whistling In Blue Hill

WHISTLING IN BLUE HILL


You walk on lean trail in blue hill
The winds waft to take you along
Whisper in the ear a sound shrill
Reaching your heart it becomes song.

Whistling a dulcet song in the wind
You walk on lean trail in blue hill
The song wraps the tree leaves to find
How music in them winds instill. 

The song echoes in the valley still
Sounds of serene silence persist
You walk on lean trail in blue hill
With music rippling in grey mist.

In mind joyful aloneness stays
In ecstasy your senses distill
Your within lighted by sun rays
You walk on lean trail in blue hill.

September 27, 2017.
Form : Quatern. Syllable count : 8 each line

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Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 10:48 PM Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.

Gregory Richard Barden October 1, 2017 at 8:50 PM Love your work, Subimal, and this is just superb! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) Subimal Sinha-Roy October 1, 2017 at 9:32 PM Thank you, Greg for visiting and appreciating. I value your comments so much.

Agnes Krampe September 28, 2017 at 1:47 PM Congrats on your win, Subimal. Subimal Sinha-Roy September 29, 2017 at 1:30 AM Thank you, Agnes.

Janice Canerdy September 28, 2017 at 12:42 PM Lovely poem, Subimal! Congrats! Janice Subimal Sinha-Roy September 29, 2017 at 1:29 AM Thank you, Janis.

Constance La France September 28, 2017 at 9:31 AM Subimal, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem! Subimal Sinha-Roy September 28, 2017 at 9:38 AM Thank you, BW for your appreciation.

Janis Medders Tobechi September 27, 2017 at 7:45 PM Very peaceful and lovely. Subimal Sinha-Roy September 28, 2017 at 3:03 AM Thank you, Janis.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2017 at 6:00 PM Love seeing you do a quatern here, Subimal. It is one of my favorite forms and I love how you did this beautiful poem. Subimal Sinha-Roy September 28, 2017 at 3:02 AM Thank you, Andrea. I like this form too. It brings in a rhythm that wafts.

Vijay Pandit September 27, 2017 at 4:45 AM Lovely--so well written, as always! Subimal Sinha-Roy September 28, 2017 at 2:48 AM Thank you, Vijay for your appreciation. You have always been.