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Whistle train, off in the way A warming sound to me today. Where will your paths be taking you? I'm restless now, and would come too, But for the warmth here in my stall, I've nothing but to hear your call. These winter howls that beat about As dreadful fowls that scream and shout, Subsided for today and so, I'm soothed to hear your whistle blow. If it were spring, I'd tread the grass, nodding politely to the ass, And this is proper too of course, A proper thing when you're a horse. But here I stand, and wait for spring, It's been so nice to hear you sing. When snow is gone, and sunshine's bright, Or stars hang low some summer night; I'll hear your thunderous mighty hooves, Faster than the hungry wolves. And as I hear your whistle call, No longer stranded in my stall, I'll race you, till the East is West! I'll prove myself in this great quest! As free as you, across the plains, I'll laugh at thunder and the rains. And we will fly across the gold, How great to be so free and bold! But now I hear you far away... And here I stand, in thick warm hay. For now, I'll wait, My dreams won't wain. This Spring, I'll gallop With the train. Written during a long snowy ice-cold winter. December 1992 Winter is not forever. <3 By BJ Legros Kelley 'A Gallop with the Train' Copyright Kaylianna M. Kelley Created by the artist from 'Artistic Glow Studio' exclusively for this poem and used by permission. Painting rights reserved by Kaylianna M. Kelley.

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Date: 3/22/2023 11:06:00 PM
This reads like a winter that changes a person's life. I know a friend that moved to warmer climate to escape the cold. I hope your spring lasts a lifetime. One of the best poems I have ever read. A FAVE for sure. Love the art work.
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Anon :) Yes, for certain, it really can change a life, it did ours! I liked snow before that winter, and not so much now. Yes, we saddled up and blazed a trail back west after that icy cold winter, and wish we never looked back. But what a beautiful paradise in spring and summertime ! Your comment is the highest compliment I could ever receive, thank you so much :) Your Fave is a true honor <3 The artwork is by Kaylianna of Artistic Glow Studio, isn't it beautiful? She painted that for me :) <3
Date: 2/14/2023 2:18:00 PM
This is cute, I feel this horse's hopes within the heart; beautiful lines for his dreams of the coming springtime.
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:39:00 PM
Thank you M.L., I am sorry to respond so late. I am so uplifted by your comment :) Well, it is springtime! Hopefully some of the wild weather will subside, and all creatures, and people, will enjoy the beautiful season of spring! Thank you so much for your visit and comment, you have brightened my day :)
Date: 2/13/2023 5:02:00 AM
A masterpiece of a poem. A joy to read! Full of imagery and action.
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Frances! Wow, what an amazingly encouraging comment! Thank you for your visit, wonderful words, and for making my day :) Have a blessed day, and, happy spring!
Date: 1/25/2023 6:27:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously experience Winter, and joyously await for Spring... since I live in the Tropics where only two seasons prevail: Dry and Wet. Thanks likewise for this excellent example of what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Date: 3/23/2023 12:57:00 PM
:) Beata, you are always such a joy, your comment has lifted my heart and blessed me as usual :) You are lucky I think, to live in the tropics! I now live in a warmer climate, and I do prefer warmth over snow. That was such a cold and long snowy winter! I hope you are well my friend, hugs to you Beata! <3
Date: 1/21/2023 8:06:00 PM
As I will hear your whistle call, no longer stranded… The Spring I ‘ll gallop with train. I enjoyed. Have Good days.
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Date: 3/23/2023 12:54:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem Anisha, this is one of my favorites, and now my daughter has painted the image shared with my poem :) I hope you are well Anisha, you come to my mind often, and I pray you are well. Happy spring dear friend :)
Date: 1/21/2023 3:21:00 PM
What a beautiful poem you wrote all those years ago BJ, very creative writing written from a horse’s view… Belle
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Date: 3/23/2023 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Belle :) I remember very distinctly the night I wrote this. It was snowing, and snowing, and getting so terribly deep. That day there was a sweet pause, and I heard the train, and I wished to be on it, heading to warmer climate. I remembered the horses who were so joyful, and in a worse situation than I, they were in their stalls, how sad! This poem is one of my favorites :)
Date: 1/21/2023 11:23:00 AM
What a wonderfully delightful poem from the horse's point of view. I hope i can be half so clever writing one like this
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Date: 3/23/2023 12:47:00 PM
Aw, really Andrea, you are one of the most clever poets ever :) Your comment has truly blessed! I hope you are well my friend, I am not on here as often as I wish to be. It makes me mad at myself that I am so far behind on comments, and not able to visit others poems as much as I want to. I hope you and your hubby are well. Happy spring dear Andrea, hugs to you! :) <3
Date: 1/20/2023 10:55:00 AM
Wonderful BJ: I can really feel him longing to stretch out and run. So beautifully expressed. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:03:00 PM
I love your daughter’s painting, BJ. How talented she is….like her beautiful Mom. Made me smile today. Best, SuZ
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/23/2023 12:43:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, I'm glad you liked my poem, this is one of my favorites, written so long ago. Hugs to you as well!
Date: 1/19/2023 9:23:00 PM
Shelley's famous lines resonate in my ear.... "If winter comes, can spring be far behind". Like humans, animals too look forward to the arrival of winter as the horse in your poem. Beautifully rhyming poem BJ
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Date: 3/23/2023 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Valsa :) Spring has sprung since I wrote this poem, but seems to be a bit chillier than is usual, but I suppose it won't be too much longer :) I couldn't help but think of the horses during that long cold and snowy winter, it made me count my blessings, at least we could occupy ourselves in our little home, they were stranded in their stalls, a very sad thought! Thank you for your visit and comment as always, my sweet friend, I so appreciate you <3
Date: 1/19/2023 4:59:00 AM
Love this BJ….thoughts of a horse…brilliant! Debx
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Deb, I love horses so much :) <3
Date: 1/18/2023 2:54:00 AM
Oh how we wish Spring is round the corner. Lovely poem.
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:19:00 PM
I can hardly wait for spring! I am tempted to buy my flower seeds early this year, and just look at them and remember that winter will pass, spring will once again be here :)
Date: 1/17/2023 7:22:00 AM
A poem that is quite moving; BJ. In the depths of winter, thoughts of spring are comforting. The horse often fantasizes about outrunning the train into the springtime. I enjoyed the poem you wrote.
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:17:00 PM
I'm glad you like my poem Sotto. I am hoping my artist friend, or my daughter will illustrate my poem how I see the scene in my mind. This is an old poem I wrote over thirty years ago, and this long winter in my old home town made me want to find this poem again. It is good to remember winter is not forever :)
Date: 1/17/2023 6:12:00 AM
Reminiscing of spring in the midst of winter. Horse has a dream of racing the train into spring. Loved your poem, BJ.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 1/19/2023 12:14:00 PM
Yes, it is hard for us humans, and hard on the creatures as well. I was inspired to write this many years ago, and that winter has ended, and this one will too! I can hardly wait!!
Date: 1/17/2023 4:23:00 AM
I wish to join your train ride dear friend, its sounds like so much fun.
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Date: 1/19/2023 2:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing so much, you are a deep treasure, love xo
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 1/19/2023 12:12:00 PM
I wrote the poem when I was so tired of the snow, so cooped up in our little house, and the kids couldn't even play outside in the snow. We had a half built igloo in our yard but were all sick with a terrible flu! I remembered the beautiful horses in the spring and summer, so happy and free, all shut up in barns covered in snow! Thinking of them, and then hearing a train, I wrote this poem. The following Spring we went on a trip, and by the end of summer, we were headed to greener pastures, where there was no more blizzards and snow! It had been a really hard winter, like so many are having now. I had to really search for this old poem, I found it in an old antique trunk that holds many old journals. It is a timely reminder; winter is not forever! :) <3
Date: 1/17/2023 3:35:00 AM
I feel the same emotions really. Would that winter were gone, we will admire the new blooms. Lovely poem.
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:05:00 PM
Oh, I can hardly wait Victor :) I was at the store a few days ago and the shelves are being stocked with seeds. What a sweet promise of joy. Winter is not forever :)
Date: 1/17/2023 3:09:00 AM
This is brilliant. A fave. I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:04:00 PM
I'm so blessed and honored by your sweet words and fave Gina :) <3 God bless you as well my friend! <3

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