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Whispers of the Wind

Oh, if only you would incline your auricle to me my dear 
and walk slowly towards the wisps of my caress, your skin 
cool and fresh as rain, would feel the touch of my breath 
I would whisper little nothings in your shell and tell you secrets 
comb your hair, kiss your face, like only a mother's love could  
I'd lift the collar off your neck and blow kisses on your nape
I'd guide you into the warm rush of air that fills your void   
I'd lay on your chest while you breathe and repeat your creed 
if only you would draw your helix ear to me and listen softly 
I would be your song, your poem or maybe, a tinkling chime 
I'd be your constant companion and listen to you, all for free 
If I were the wind on your back, I'd push you gently forward 
give you so many gusts of joy you would never turn your back 
If I were the wind on your face I'd make you blush with pleasure 
oh, if only you would incline your ear to me, my dear, 
what a proud wind I would be...

July 17, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 7/21/2021 5:52:00 AM
Wonderful personification. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/18/2021 10:45:00 AM
A gentle wind, there is nothing like it, so uplifting....Delice
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Date: 7/18/2021 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Delice, for stopping by, All the best
Date: 7/17/2021 6:51:00 AM
Such a lovely, romantic poem, Vie. I love a gentle wind It exhilarates me. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Victor for your kind visit
Date: 7/17/2021 6:36:00 AM
Enjoyed the whispers of wind, Vienna.
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for stopping by
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