Whispers of our soul

“Does the universe really rehearse,
emotes of heart before penning love’s verse?”
      ~ quote by poet


It had all makings of a masterpiece,
nuanced right down to the smallest detail
but the flow of symbols brought forth no peace,
to afterglow trailing the comet’s tail,
so fake adornments needed to decrease,
else maze of metaphors would make taste stale.

Soft sounds of silence, sparking like stardust,
bypassed mind and spoke directly to heart,
etching thereon light strobes, love ousting lust,
seeing thereby patterns of old depart,
wooing the void, in time gaining its trust,
that divine consciousness, then inks its art.

How may laboured breathing weave words of love,
when all save man know, grace flows from above?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/1/2024 7:04:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the quote, Constance
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Date: 10/1/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you for hosting, the placement and for introducing me to this form as well, dear Constance
Date: 9/23/2024 12:06:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful and insightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 9/23/2024 1:35:00 AM
Thank you, Beata dear
Date: 9/21/2024 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2024 12:27:00 PM
Delighted you enjoyed, Sara dear
Date: 9/16/2024 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/quote. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 9/16/2024 10:28:00 AM
Delighted you enjoyed, Paula dear
Date: 9/16/2024 6:52:00 AM
Yes, grace flows from above. A meaningful and profound hybronnet. Congratulations Seeker friend on your top placement.
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Date: 9/16/2024 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Valsa dear, God bless
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