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Whispers of Love

Your softest whisper, how it floods my soul It glides through veins eliciting control There is no place where it does not embrace Disrobes me of my negligee of lace That whispered vow you sealed with lover's kiss Your body claimed me, took my soul to bliss And while enraptured all my heart could hear Were words so tender, whispered in my ear Abated storm of passion, now at rest Your head is pillowed softly on my breast I’m pleasure sated as I whisper sweet “My love, this tryst has been a glorious treat” My name you whisper just before you sleep A treasured whisper that our love will keep For Gail's Doyle's Contest Whispers of Love April 2, 2014

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Justin Bordner

Date: 9/10/2014 2:40:00 AM

As passion's force calms to low, a heart may rest with loving best...for love you know...your beauty brought this out of me tonight Eileen. How pleasured filled your moments are. This poem has such a beautiful rhyme of tender touch. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 4:25:00 AM

I came upon this poem by chance and here I see a comment to you I have not responded to....I can't fathom how that happened. Perhaps I was overwhelmed. A heart may rest with loving best...Sweet, Justin. If I can inspire you in any way....I'm happy. Your tender touch on my life is sweet.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/20/2014 5:55:00 AM

Amazingf write Eileen n congrats on a fine win !

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2014 10:56:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2014 4:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your well deserved 9th place, Eileen - Have a lovely day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thanks, my dear Sunshine

Tim Smith

Date: 5/19/2014 9:18:00 PM

See you did place my dear...A lovely piece congrats Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2014 10:54:00 AM

Thanks, Tim. Lovely consolation.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2014 10:01:00 AM

whispers, it was first place in my book!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2014 10:53:00 AM

Stupid auto correct! I meant a ninth place win...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2014 10:52:00 AM

Thanks, Arthur. A nonetheless place win doesn't really move me. Thanks for the vote of confidence.

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/5/2014 9:17:00 AM

Yes! Whisper into another valiant (k)night and take you as you are. Hell...yeah.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/13/2014 8:07:00 AM

Oh Drake...I needed to read this.....I didn't place on the contest....and I have over 500 views... :( Oh well...I'm glad you like it. Hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/4/2014 10:20:00 PM

Wow wow wow, yet again! I hope you are well! I have not been around lately, so dropped in to read for a bit! This is truly another beautiful write!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/13/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thanks for liking this sonnet, Arthur. It didn't place in the contest. :( I'm gutted...as you say in good 'ol England...Oh well. Thanks for the wow's. It eases the pain. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/3/2014 8:50:00 AM

Hello Eileen, I really enjoyed your blog yesterday.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/3/2014 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Richard....I'm glad you did. :) The response wasn't too great. I guess it was too...MUSHY! Oh well, I'm glad that you visited and posted. Thanks ever so much!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2014 12:48:00 PM

Loud talk never leads to passion and love; it's the silent whisper that usually wins the day :) very romantic. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 8:33:00 AM

Congratulation, Eileen; to me personally, this was high on the list....:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/2/2014 1:40:00 PM

:) How are you, Paul? Hope all is well. Thank you for your continued visits. You are a ray of light. Blessings.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/2/2014 12:04:00 PM

No sound more thunderous than the whisper of love my dear Eileen! Beautiful and romantic sonnet composed by the tenderness and affection of your loving heart! Good luck! A 7!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/2/2014 1:39:00 PM

My dear poet...you honor me! I'm ever grateful for your comments, Dr Trifiatis. :) Thank you for wishing me luck. I do so want to do well....:) Hope you are doing well and are in good health and enjoying happiness.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/2/2014 9:58:00 AM

My sweet Eilee... this is a beautiful poem..!! full of passion and depth emotion... I love it!! ^_^ I wish you luck ,girl friend!!! .. oxoxox ^_^

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/2/2014 11:37:00 AM

Thanks, gorgeous! I surely appreciate your well wishes! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/2/2014 9:01:00 AM

Third stanza second line you missed a r at the end of you. Now to the important part. I love the poem, it makes love feel like a drug and I must admit I am an addict. I'm sure this will do well in Gail's contest.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/2/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for looking out for me, Rick. I appreciate it more than you know...I'm so glad that you didn't leave that MOST important part out. :) I do hope Gail likes it.