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Whispers of Love

Your softest whisper, how it floods my soul
It glides through veins eliciting control
There is no place where it does not embrace
Disrobes me of my negligee of lace

That whispered vow you sealed with lover's kiss
Your body claimed me, took my soul to bliss
And while enraptured all my heart could hear
Were words so tender, whispered in my ear

Abated storm of passion, now at rest
Your head is pillowed softly on my breast
I’m pleasure sated as I whisper sweet
“My love, this tryst has been a glorious treat”

My name you whisper just before you sleep
A treasured whisper that our love will keep

For Gail's Doyle's Contest
Whispers of Love
April 2, 2014

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Justin Bordner Date: 9/10/2014 2:40:00 AM As passion's force calms to low, a heart may rest with loving best...for love you know...your beauty brought this out of me tonight Eileen. How pleasured filled your moments are. This poem has such a beautiful rhyme of tender touch. J.A.B. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/17/2014 4:25:00 AM I came upon this poem by chance and here I see a comment to you I have not responded to....I can't fathom how that happened. Perhaps I was overwhelmed. A heart may rest with loving best...Sweet, Justin. If I can inspire you in any way....I'm happy. Your tender touch on my life is sweet.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/20/2014 5:55:00 AM Amazingf write Eileen n congrats on a fine win ! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/20/2014 10:56:00 AM Thanks for your kind comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/20/2014 4:03:00 AM - Congratulations on your well deserved 9th place, Eileen - Have a lovely day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/20/2014 10:55:00 AM Thanks, my dear Sunshine

Tim Smith Date: 5/19/2014 9:18:00 PM See you did place my dear...A lovely piece congrats Tim Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/20/2014 10:54:00 AM Thanks, Tim. Lovely consolation.

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/13/2014 10:01:00 AM whispers, it was first place in my book! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/20/2014 10:53:00 AM Stupid auto correct! I meant a ninth place win... Eileen Manassian Date: 5/20/2014 10:52:00 AM Thanks, Arthur. A nonetheless place win doesn't really move me. Thanks for the vote of confidence.

Poet Tacito Date: 4/5/2014 9:17:00 AM Yes! Whisper into another valiant (k)night and take you as you are. Hell...yeah. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/13/2014 8:07:00 AM Oh Drake...I needed to read this.....I didn't place on the contest....and I have over 500 views... :( Oh well...I'm glad you like it. Hugs

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/4/2014 10:20:00 PM Wow wow wow, yet again! I hope you are well! I have not been around lately, so dropped in to read for a bit! This is truly another beautiful write! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/13/2014 8:08:00 AM Thanks for liking this sonnet, Arthur. It didn't place in the contest. :( I'm gutted...as you say in good 'ol England...Oh well. Thanks for the wow's. It eases the pain. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/3/2014 8:50:00 AM Hello Eileen, I really enjoyed your blog yesterday. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/3/2014 10:29:00 AM Thank you, Richard....I'm glad you did. :) The response wasn't too great. I guess it was too...MUSHY! Oh well, I'm glad that you visited and posted. Thanks ever so much!

Paul Callus Date: 4/2/2014 12:48:00 PM Loud talk never leads to passion and love; it's the silent whisper that usually wins the day :) very romantic. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 5/20/2014 8:33:00 AM Congratulation, Eileen; to me personally, this was high on the list....:) Eileen Manassian Date: 4/2/2014 1:40:00 PM :) How are you, Paul? Hope all is well. Thank you for your continued visits. You are a ray of light. Blessings.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/2/2014 12:04:00 PM No sound more thunderous than the whisper of love my dear Eileen! Beautiful and romantic sonnet composed by the tenderness and affection of your loving heart! Good luck! A 7! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/2/2014 1:39:00 PM My dear poet...you honor me! I'm ever grateful for your comments, Dr Trifiatis. :) Thank you for wishing me luck. I do so want to do well....:) Hope you are doing well and are in good health and enjoying happiness.

Aiyah Torres Date: 4/2/2014 9:58:00 AM My sweet Eilee... this is a beautiful poem..!! full of passion and depth emotion... I love it!! ^_^ I wish you luck ,girl friend!!! .. oxoxox ^_^ Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/2/2014 11:37:00 AM Thanks, gorgeous! I surely appreciate your well wishes! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/2/2014 9:01:00 AM Third stanza second line you missed a r at the end of you. Now to the important part. I love the poem, it makes love feel like a drug and I must admit I am an addict. I'm sure this will do well in Gail's contest. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/2/2014 11:39:00 AM Thank you for looking out for me, Rick. I appreciate it more than you know...I'm so glad that you didn't leave that MOST important part out. :) I do hope Gail likes it.