Eileen Manassian Poet Sonnet

Whispers of Love

Your softest whisper, how it floods my soul
It glides through veins eliciting control
There is no place where it does not embrace
Disrobes me of my negligee of lace

That whispered vow you sealed with lover's kiss
Your body claimed me, took my soul to bliss
And while enraptured all my heart could hear
Were words so tender, whispered in my ear

Abated storm of passion, now at rest
Your head is pillowed softly on my breast
I’m pleasure sated as I whisper sweet
“My love, this tryst has been a glorious treat”

My name you whisper just before you sleep
A treasured whisper that our love will keep

For Gail's Doyle's Contest
Whispers of Love
April 2, 2014

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Justin Bordner September 10, 2014 at 2:40 AM As passion's force calms to low, a heart may rest with loving best...for love you know...your beauty brought this out of me tonight Eileen. How pleasured filled your moments are. This poem has such a beautiful rhyme of tender touch. J.A.B. Eileen Manassian December 17, 2014 at 4:25 AM I came upon this poem by chance and here I see a comment to you I have not responded to....I can't fathom how that happened. Perhaps I was overwhelmed. A heart may rest with loving best...Sweet, Justin. If I can inspire you in any way....I'm happy. Your tender touch on my life is sweet.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 20, 2014 at 5:55 AM Amazingf write Eileen n congrats on a fine win ! Eileen Manassian May 20, 2014 at 10:56 AM Thanks for your kind comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 20, 2014 at 4:03 AM - Congratulations on your well deserved 9th place, Eileen - Have a lovely day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian May 20, 2014 at 10:55 AM Thanks, my dear Sunshine

Tim Smith May 19, 2014 at 9:18 PM See you did place my dear...A lovely piece congrats Tim Eileen Manassian May 20, 2014 at 10:54 AM Thanks, Tim. Lovely consolation.

Arthur Vaso April 13, 2014 at 10:01 AM whispers, it was first place in my book! Eileen Manassian May 20, 2014 at 10:53 AM Stupid auto correct! I meant a ninth place win... Eileen Manassian May 20, 2014 at 10:52 AM Thanks, Arthur. A nonetheless place win doesn't really move me. Thanks for the vote of confidence.

Poet Tacito April 5, 2014 at 9:17 AM Yes! Whisper into another valiant (k)night and take you as you are. Hell...yeah. Eileen Manassian April 13, 2014 at 8:07 AM Oh Drake...I needed to read this.....I didn't place on the contest....and I have over 500 views... :( Oh well...I'm glad you like it. Hugs

Arthur Vaso April 4, 2014 at 10:20 PM Wow wow wow, yet again! I hope you are well! I have not been around lately, so dropped in to read for a bit! This is truly another beautiful write! Eileen Manassian April 13, 2014 at 8:08 AM Thanks for liking this sonnet, Arthur. It didn't place in the contest. :( I'm gutted...as you say in good 'ol England...Oh well. Thanks for the wow's. It eases the pain. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux April 3, 2014 at 8:50 AM Hello Eileen, I really enjoyed your blog yesterday. Eileen Manassian April 3, 2014 at 10:29 AM Thank you, Richard....I'm glad you did. :) The response wasn't too great. I guess it was too...MUSHY! Oh well, I'm glad that you visited and posted. Thanks ever so much!

Paul Callus April 2, 2014 at 12:48 PM Loud talk never leads to passion and love; it's the silent whisper that usually wins the day :) very romantic. // paul Paul Callus May 20, 2014 at 8:33 AM Congratulation, Eileen; to me personally, this was high on the list....:) Eileen Manassian April 2, 2014 at 1:40 PM :) How are you, Paul? Hope all is well. Thank you for your continued visits. You are a ray of light. Blessings.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 2, 2014 at 12:04 PM No sound more thunderous than the whisper of love my dear Eileen! Beautiful and romantic sonnet composed by the tenderness and affection of your loving heart! Good luck! A 7! Eileen Manassian April 2, 2014 at 1:39 PM My dear poet...you honor me! I'm ever grateful for your comments, Dr Trifiatis. :) Thank you for wishing me luck. I do so want to do well....:) Hope you are doing well and are in good health and enjoying happiness.

Aiyah Torres April 2, 2014 at 9:58 AM My sweet Eilee... this is a beautiful poem..!! full of passion and depth emotion... I love it!! ^_^ I wish you luck ,girl friend!!! .. oxoxox ^_^ Eileen Manassian April 2, 2014 at 11:37 AM Thanks, gorgeous! I surely appreciate your well wishes! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux April 2, 2014 at 9:01 AM Third stanza second line you missed a r at the end of you. Now to the important part. I love the poem, it makes love feel like a drug and I must admit I am an addict. I'm sure this will do well in Gail's contest. Eileen Manassian April 2, 2014 at 11:39 AM Thank you for looking out for me, Rick. I appreciate it more than you know...I'm so glad that you didn't leave that MOST important part out. :) I do hope Gail likes it.