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Whispers of Light As Time Scores

Walking the park, don't know the score. Awaiting lunch, my eyes just roam... A teen has tried five times or more to reach her friend(s), but no one's home. Calls are ignored for time has scored. There's no one home as my eyes roam. A stranger strolls with oft-seen pup. The dog breaks loose, comes to my hand; tempted by my lunch, he jumps up. Girl eyes her watch, checks the bus stand. She's been stood up. Lonesome pup at my hand seems to understand? As children frolic on the swings; moms dressed in black pace the lawn. My waitress eyes these same odd things then she comments on what's going on, “We're all on swings and time's on wings; This is the dawn when life moves on.” Reason A. Poteet, 2/14/2014 an inverted refrain for Gail Doyle's Whispers of Light Contest

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Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 PM
A beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations, DONNA... XOX ~ LINDA
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Date: 3/27/2014 12:10:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2014 9:10:00 PM
thanks, Sara, it was a hard write in some ways, kinda personal.
Date: 3/26/2014 7:16:00 PM
Well done...congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/26/2014 10:09:00 AM
a most perceptive piece, reason.. amazing!..big cheers on your top win... huggs
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Date: 3/27/2014 9:11:00 PM
thank you, nette, I am glad you left a comment.
Date: 2/22/2014 9:00:00 AM
Very nice piece. All things happen for a reason. Maybe it was for the best. Good Luck !
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Date: 2/22/2014 10:18:00 AM
"Thanks, Vincent, it was a longer piece at my original writing but this contest host required a limited no. of words. When the contest is judged, I will add the other two stanzas...The last one concludes with the rapture of Christians from the earth."

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