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Written on February 8, 2024

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"The love we give away is the only love we keep." — Elbert Hubbard. In breathless dreams, my passions were growing, fanciful feelings, wordlessly screaming, when your eyes met mine, blessings were flowing. sure that your smile would bring life’s redeeming songs of soft light fall gentle on my soul, fanciful feelings, wordlessly screaming. life stirred with joy because my heart you stole, your tender touch brought me a renewed hope, songs of soft light fall gentle on my soul. time revealed the thrill when we would elope, two hearts bursting with love and affection your tender touch brought me a renewed hope. in our marriage love stirred true perfection living in the wonder of two as one two hearts bursting with love and affection rustlings of feelings that can’t be outdone, in breathless dreams, my passions were growing, living in the wonder of two as one when your eyes met mine, blessings were flowing.

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Date: 2/22/2024 3:49:00 PM
Dear Regina, Your poem is a lyrical masterpiece, weaving emotions into a captivating story of love’s journey. Each line is filled with the depth of feeling, evoking a symphony of emotions that dance through the soul. Your imagery is exquisite, such words of passion and tenderness. It’s a testament to the power of love’s embrace, where every word carries the weight of heartfelt connection. What a beautiful ode to love’s enduring grace. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Regina for your win with such a lovely poem that seemed to beam with a bright floodlight illuminating exquisite feelings of love. Most enjoyed.. Wen
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:50:00 AM
Dear Gina, this is absolutely stunning and so lyrical and so very well woven, i love the flow and also the way youve used poetic techniques and expressed in a seamless manner while using a form of poetry that may sometimes be hard for others to do,Youv expressed effortlessly in such a sincere manner. I really loved reading this especially your refrains were catchy! Love! I felt here. Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing, a fave definitely for me
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Date: 2/8/2024 3:10:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Gina. It seems like all of yours belong there. Beautiful, spirit filled Love. Praise God for the guidance of the Holy Spirit, that soulmates may be drawn together, that two shall become one. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 2/8/2024 2:07:00 PM
living two as one is both sublime and divine (personal experience talking here). This is truly a lovely romance poem, perfect for Valentine's Day....enjoyed the read, Sara
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