Regina Mcintosh Poet Terzanelle

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Written on February 8, 2024

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Whispers of Light

"The love we give away is the only love we keep." — Elbert Hubbard.

In breathless dreams, my passions were growing,
fanciful feelings, wordlessly screaming,
when your eyes met mine, blessings were flowing.

sure that your smile would bring life’s redeeming
songs of soft light fall gentle on my soul,
fanciful feelings, wordlessly screaming.

life stirred with joy because my heart you stole,
your tender touch brought me a renewed hope,
songs of soft light fall gentle on my soul.

time revealed the thrill when we would elope,
two hearts bursting with love and affection
your tender touch brought me a renewed hope.

in our marriage love stirred true perfection
living in the wonder of two as one
two hearts bursting with love and affection

rustlings of feelings that can’t be outdone,
in breathless dreams, my passions were growing,
living in the wonder of two as one
when your eyes met mine, blessings were flowing.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers February 22, 2024 at 3:49 PM Dear Regina, Your poem is a lyrical masterpiece, weaving emotions into a captivating story of love’s journey. Each line is filled with the depth of feeling, evoking a symphony of emotions that dance through the soul. Your imagery is exquisite, such words of passion and tenderness. It’s a testament to the power of love’s embrace, where every word carries the weight of heartfelt connection. What a beautiful ode to love’s enduring grace. - Blessings, Daniel

Speaks Volumes February 20, 2024 at 9:37 AM Congratulations Regina for your win with such a lovely poem that seemed to beam with a bright floodlight illuminating exquisite feelings of love. Most enjoyed.. Wen

Ink Empress February 20, 2024 at 5:50 AM Dear Gina, this is absolutely stunning and so lyrical and so very well woven, i love the flow and also the way youve used poetic techniques and expressed in a seamless manner while using a form of poetry that may sometimes be hard for others to do,Youv expressed effortlessly in such a sincere manner. I really loved reading this especially your refrains were catchy! Love! I felt here. Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing, a fave definitely for me

Bill Baker February 8, 2024 at 3:10 PM A FAV for my list, Gina. It seems like all of yours belong there. Beautiful, spirit filled Love. Praise God for the guidance of the Holy Spirit, that soulmates may be drawn together, that two shall become one. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill