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Whispers of Dawn

Dawn waves with a smile that astounds She says 'Good morning' without a sound She sleeps when most are wide awake, And wakes when most are fast asleep She shouts across the horizons that a new day is being born and quietly whispers greetings of the morn

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Date: 11/29/2024 11:26:00 AM
This poem beautifully captures the essence of inherent nature with simplicity and elegance. The imagery of the animals’ tails reflects the unchangeable traits that define their existence, serving as a quiet yet powerful reminder to embrace and honor what is innate in all of us. Short, sweet, and wonderfully profound. ???
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 11/30/2024 8:15:00 AM
What a gracious comment, Lunarya. Thank you, kindly.
Date: 11/29/2024 11:21:00 AM
Very well written! Blessings to you.
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 11/30/2024 8:17:00 AM
I am honored. Thank you.

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