Whispers of Anemone

She sits alone In the chiselled grey of stone In her thoughts so stubborn Leaves airborne Mostly unknown The little that is known Of the silence in her shapely bone Is hidden in the tendrils overgrown In her ringlet curls Infinity neatly furled Its splashes In her eyelashes Nestling her cares Of the flowers of her prayer What will be fair To do away with or bear? Thorns in the crimson air Thoughts multilayered Collected in thick braid of her hair In her mental eye She looks there Reaping the pain she had sown She sits alone In a wing of the bird a desire In the other a low moan She sits alone Look at her heart on her face A melancholy grace Blood inside in race Yet moonlight likes to come apace And fill the beautiful space Near the flute of her nose Near the eyelids closed In contemplation Of the waves in the ocean A mighty tug of war Between happiness and sadness How lonely life has grown Whispers of anemone In the chiselled grey of stone She sits alone ______________________________________ August 9, 2017 For the contest by Eve Roper

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Date: 10/1/2017 9:16:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful. I feel the pleasure of silence
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Date: 8/21/2017 2:52:00 PM
Another stellar write, Probir. The flow of this poem rises and fall like the rhythms of life. Simpy beautiful, and expressed w/exquisite imagery. Love and peace, my friend.
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Date: 8/15/2017 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Probir to win on the wonderful poem.
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Date: 8/14/2017 2:44:00 PM
It's amazing Probir.... I wrote a book of Persian Poetry called " Avay-e- Shaghayegh" that its translation is The Whispers of Anemone.... Congratulations
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Date: 8/13/2017 10:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A nicely flowing poem.
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Date: 8/13/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Probir , I love the scene you created for the painting. Very well-crafted poem with, fantastic flow . Congratulations on your win. ~*
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Date: 8/13/2017 6:21:00 PM
Hi Probir, such melancholy and lovely imagery expressed. A joy to read. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/9/2017 3:32:00 PM
A wondrous melancholic poem that paints the beauty of anemone (The flower of the wind) with such mastery! I loved it my friend, Probir! Good luck!
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Date: 8/9/2017 8:51:00 AM
I love the rhyming in this Probir. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/9/2017 7:51:00 AM
Enjoyable read, Probir! Lovely descriptions! GL in contest!
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