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Whispers From the Past

To walk the cliffs of ancient trails
     that speak of winds and loss laid bare
     midst sounds to tell of all the tales
     of lore and truths they beg to share

     Taxila, Sanchi and Petra call
     with voices rasping in their dust
     tongues only whisper since their fall
     of Gods who but betrayed their trust

     More than hidden treasure left
     is wisdom time holds in their stones
     a quest to seek their dreams bereft
     that repose within their poets bones

     Trails that lead to gilded wings
     oft will find more precious things

     Where I Want To Go Contest
     Sponsored by Nicola Byrne
     02/19/2017

     First Place Contest Winner
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Duncan Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Very good write :)
Smith Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Thank you Debbie...
Ricci Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Hello Charlie. Contest or no contest. Your entry can stand on its own. I found your execution to poetry in the most traditional fashion starting with the title. The ending couplet can make a reader pause. Wonderful work entirely.
Smith Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thank you very much Lisa...
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 3:35 PM
My this poem is outstanding Charlie! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! A fave for me! 7 ; )
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:49 PM
You are so kind Connie, thank you...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Well penned. Congrats and blessings.
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Thank you Janis...
Pekrul Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Nicely done. Congrats.
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Thank you David...
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Excellent poem Charlie, congrats :)
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Thank you Gary...
Green Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Looks like congratulations are in order for you my friend. Great entry into the contest and a great choice by Nicola for the top spot. :)
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Thank you Chris...
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March 20, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Charlie, congrats on your top win! Janice
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thank you Janice...
Carmack Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 9:49 PM
I hope this poem does well in the contest. Well done Charlie.
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:10 PM
Thank you Rob...
May Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Beautifully penned Charlie..Great write..A7
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:22 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Hardison Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:06 AM
Enchanting voice in history Best of luck in contest. Peace, Love ad Joy
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Thank you John...
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Charlie , you did yours in a very original way . Back to nature kind of poetry. Very nicely done!
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Wonderful Sonnet great imagery and rhyme... good luck in the contest
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Eve...
Onclaud Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:33 PM
i've been to petra but would like visit the other two ... very glorious piece, nice description of heavenly places on earth, charlie..huggs
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 2:01 PM
I've always enjoyed history, these places share a major role in it, thank you Nette...
Lamoureux Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Sounds magical!
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 11:18 AM
Yes it does, Thanks Richard...
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February 20, 2017 at 1:32 AM
An incredible sonnet and wonderful adventure told, Charlie...best of luck in the contest and thank you for your kind visits! Hugs, Rhonda
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 6:33 AM
You are too kind,thank you Rhonda...
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Your adventurous spirit shines through this excellent sonnet, Charlie. Such beautiful words from a true poet! GL in the contest :)
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Your kindness shines from your every word Dear Laura, thank you....
Marie Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:59 PM
This is beautiful. An endearing piece to remember the lessons history has taught us, learning never gets old. Wonderfully written, a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Thank you Lynn...
Sands Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Excellent Charlie. Good luck in the contest :)
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Thank you Heidi...
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February 19, 2017 at 2:25 PM
- There are a lot of precious memories in the history ... many is forgotten ... but fortunately many are preserved forever - Great written, Charlie - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...
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