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Whispers From Picmindo

As this world of ours closes down there lays a lonely young girl she whispers to the goblins from another town for the enchanted wall to open to join their realm filled with fairies, pixies the magic is the goblins way her night is filled with delightfully told magical stories where this young girl starts to forget, is tragic while back in this land, her family is in a panic for they should never have awoke in the dead of night to find their young Jezzabelles bed empty not one of them knew of this other realm not even Moneque, her twin sibling had any belief frantic as they walked the dark and cold streets with no sign of their baby girl they missed dearly police and searchers wernt far and wide but couldn't ponder where she was to hide for the fairies had begun to wash away her little memories for they had been longing for her to join them for many yealds as the sun arose with the morning light, where mums heart wails Jezzabelle had forgotten the life she knew forever now she'll live within the realm of Picmindo coming out only on the whispers of young lonely cries Moneque would be next life ending within this secret realm soon she would join her twin, found in the dark cries of night

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Date: 9/26/2018 8:34:00 PM
Imagination is a gift. Keep writing.
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 10/4/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thank you for your support and encouragement. It means a lot to me.
Date: 10/3/2017 8:30:00 AM
This is my very first attempt at fantasy and the beginning of my book Sparies. Its first draft has reached 3 chapters and writing to help children with every day issues and bullying and how to cope with the ways in which they can understand. I have a blessed gift to write for these children. This is the reason I must publish it in the future or what was I blessed to writing for. Thanks for every comment and every help identifying my skills as such a gift.
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Date: 6/24/2016 2:11:00 PM
sad fantasy, one where sometimes children believe would come true when they hear whispers in the night.
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 6/24/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thank you for your time. I have to admit that it is 4am when I was coming up with this poem so I am going to get some sleep and I will have an aditorial look when I get up. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Book: Shattered Sighs