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Whispers

In a breeze of timid whispers 
and with wary downcast eyes
the secret world was opened 
to where true depth of feeling lies.

With each step, stories were told 
and a tapestry of intimacy unfolded.
to dare or not to dare 
to care or not to care.
In the dog-days of romance,
those are the calls
that lovebirds must answer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Situation Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 4:41 PM
I've been called a love bird. We always answer. Nice rhyming.
Vionet Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Thank you!
Gondolf Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 3:01 AM
The dog-days of romance??? This has a feel of uncertainty to it. I say you should never let a relationship reach its “dog-days”, you must always keep it fresh and exciting.
Vionet Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Well please tell me, oh, wiser, more experienced and more romantic one - how does one keep things "fresh" when they are, at first up in the air? *Waiting breathlessly*
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