Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

Whispering Wings

Today~I heard the rustling of the leaves,                            was that your whispering wings I heard.                              Today~my wind chimes were singing a song for me,             was that your whispering wings I heard singing to me.          Today~felt a soft cool breeze cover me,                              was that your whispering wings being stretched out.

Today~I could not see you,                                                but I could feel your whispering wings all around me.




Date written: 1/11/2022

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Mike Gentile January 13, 2022 at 10:55 AM Paula, I found your poem to be enchanting in that I imagined a lost love being with me once again. It is beautiful!! Paula Goldsmith January 14, 2022 at 6:51 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write enchanting. Have a blessed day...................

Christuraj Alex January 13, 2022 at 2:03 AM Wonderful writing. Great love expressed in the last couplets. Wish you all the nest. Paula Goldsmith January 14, 2022 at 6:50 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...................

Krish Radhakrishna January 12, 2022 at 1:13 PM Paula, this is a beautiful poem!! very enchanting!!-good luck in the contest! Paula Goldsmith January 14, 2022 at 6:48 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you found this one enchanting. Have a blessed day...................

Gershon Wolf January 11, 2022 at 7:37 PM Enchanting and wonderful! Great contest entry, Paula! :) gw Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2022 at 10:09 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write enchanting and wonderful. Have a blessed day...................

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2022 at 4:34 PM So wonderful you did with this theme, Paula. Enchantingly beautiful Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2022 at 10:07 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my angel theme write. Have a blessed day...................

Debra L Brown January 11, 2022 at 2:37 PM Hello, Paula. This was a touching poem. It was enjoyable for me. Very well written. Blessings ~ Debra Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2022 at 10:07 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day...............

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 11, 2022 at 2:17 PM A touching, melodious poem, Paula. Your poems are always heartfelt - and this one too. Love ~ Mala Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2022 at 10:06 AM Thanks for your note. Glad to hear you say my poems are "always heartfelt." That means a lot to me. Have a blessed day.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 11, 2022 at 12:42 PM Paula, this heartwarming verse abounds in beauty and evokes joy. Enjoy your week, my friend. :) Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2022 at 10:03 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my angel write. Have a blessed day/week...................

Deb M January 11, 2022 at 7:09 AM Hi Paula….a truly lovely poem well worded….Enjoyed! Debx Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2022 at 10:03 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Whispering Wings write. Have a blessed day...............