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Whispering Wings

Today~I heard the rustling of the leaves, was that your whispering wings I heard. Today~my wind chimes were singing a song for me, was that your whispering wings I heard singing to me. Today~felt a soft cool breeze cover me, was that your whispering wings being stretched out. Today~I could not see you, but I could feel your whispering wings all around me. Date written: 1/11/2022

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Mike Gentile

Date: 1/13/2022 10:55:00 AM

Paula, I found your poem to be enchanting in that I imagined a lost love being with me once again. It is beautiful!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2022 6:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write enchanting. Have a blessed day...................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/13/2022 2:03:00 AM

Wonderful writing. Great love expressed in the last couplets. Wish you all the nest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2022 6:50:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...................

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 1/12/2022 1:13:00 PM

Paula, this is a beautiful poem!! very enchanting!!-good luck in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2022 6:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you found this one enchanting. Have a blessed day...................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2022 7:37:00 PM

Enchanting and wonderful! Great contest entry, Paula! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write enchanting and wonderful. Have a blessed day...................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2022 4:34:00 PM

So wonderful you did with this theme, Paula. Enchantingly beautiful

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:07:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my angel theme write. Have a blessed day...................

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/11/2022 2:37:00 PM

Hello, Paula. This was a touching poem. It was enjoyable for me. Very well written. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:07:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day...............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM

A touching, melodious poem, Paula. Your poems are always heartfelt - and this one too. Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad to hear you say my poems are "always heartfelt." That means a lot to me. Have a blessed day.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/11/2022 12:42:00 PM

Paula, this heartwarming verse abounds in beauty and evokes joy. Enjoy your week, my friend. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my angel write. Have a blessed day/week...................

Deb M

Date: 1/11/2022 7:09:00 AM

Hi Paula….a truly lovely poem well worded….Enjoyed! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Whispering Wings write. Have a blessed day...............