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Whispering Waters

Flowing 'neath the shade of Elms, dancing over time worn stones. Following a path of languid grace, soft whispering waters, call me home. ~ Not more than fifty yards away, down a pebbled path I've known, amid the roses, now gone wild, cool whispering waters call me home. ~ In sunny days or misty realms, my mind is free to roam. For I can feel the love embrace, as whispering waters call me home. ~ I think, this time, I shall stay, its very essence is in my bones. I've been returning here since a child. Whispering waters have brought me home.
6/1/2011 Paula Swanson Placement: 1st For the contest: Write Me A Rippling Stream Sponsored by Constance La France,

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Date: 6/12/2011 1:28:00 PM
Excellent piece. I followed every word, felt the childhood in me in your poem. Congratulations. Dalila
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:23:00 AM
really nice, paula.. another crown of a poem from you … super cheers for the top spot! :) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contetst, Paula
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:08:00 AM
Great win with this poem. I always like reading your poems and your win in this contest shows me I have good taste. Mike
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:19:00 AM
Wonderful poem...Congrats Paula on your 1st place win.
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Date: 6/6/2011 12:53:00 AM
Worthy of its place--whispering waters have brought me home! What a conclusion for this poem----- Feeling the essence of the waters down to your bones is a very intense relationship with the stream. Congrats, Paula! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:41:00 PM
gleaming cheers to you, paula for the tremedous win! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:52:00 PM
Congratuations, nice write. Scarlett
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:28:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your first place win in Constance's contest with this wonderful write my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Paula, on your shared first place win in my Rippling Stream contest, I think your poem is just so beautiful. I have your address to forward the certificate~~
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:00:00 PM
whisperingly beautiful, Paula. Congrats on your BIG number one win! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:43:00 PM
this is so nice I love the last stanza.. cory
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:15:00 AM
Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Paula. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:54:00 PM
Fantastic!!!! Just perfect. Will you slap me if I say I love its...flow? ;-) Hope you win. This one shines. Take care, Cyndi
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:05:00 PM
utterly beautiful write Paula.. good luck in the contest ..makes me want to dive right into the photo .. we are still at seashore ... oh so hot and grand..luv..
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:34:00 PM
This poem is simply beautiful. It reminds me of the waterfall near the den I made when I was growing up; the waterfall always calmed me down or gave me thoughts to write about.
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:23:00 PM
Paula I really do appreciate this poem. It's like being in a familiar place that you've been a long time.Like coming back to an old friend. I really embrace this!
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