Whispering Palms

Under the stern, watchful superintendence
Of whispering palms on the white sand coast 
Where a thousand strong bow to the breeze
And thousands more swing to the beat 
Giriama dancers caress their kayambas
With bared breasts teasing the gathering  
With bared chests beating the drums 
Enhanced buttocks mesmerizing the palms
And semi-nude tourists wondering aloud
How this state of undress survived it all. 


The waters of the ocean had receded
To eat grass, those in the know said
And would return in an hour or two
The sun had climbed above our heads
Fiercely defending its lofty position
As the coast dancers in seeming ease
Perhaps unafraid of the damning rays
Defied the heat in typical fashion 
And dared the eager, curious visitors
To shake a leg, or break it trying!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/7/2013 7:44:00 AM
I love this poem, Gerald..you place a vivid picture in the mind.....i see vibrant activity, i hear the drums and can feel the energy. I like your unique style with words:) great poem ty4sharing,, cherie<3
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 8/8/2013 10:57:00 AM
I visited Mombasa a while ago and I couldn't escape without a scar- poetically speaking. Thanks for visiting ever so often. That inspires.
Date: 8/7/2013 5:18:00 AM
Excellent poem your poetic language is wonderful such writing talent, I enjoy reading your poetry, thanks for sharing, blessings sueellen
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 8/8/2013 10:59:00 AM
Sue you are always welcome. Thanks. I visit, too, occasionally.
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