Get Your Premium Membership

Whispering Old Cemetery

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


I came across an old cemetery today while exploring, Full of broken, toppled headstones and tangled weeds; There was a deep hush, a whisper and a sigh, I felt tears, My tears were falling for long dead souls forgotten. A tree's roots are entwined around an old, tilted stone, In loving memory of my husband George, born Feb, 1882; Oh, George you were loved very much once upon a time, God took him, but he will not be forgotten, engraved. And I am of the age of Aquarius too, just like you, I love violets and everything purple, and I am so mellow; Oh, George were you a deep thinker, sensitive, creative, I get hurt easily and I always want to help people. Be at peace George in your decay and ravaged grave, Listen to the twittering of birds this bright sunny day; Promise, promise, I will be back to lay some purple violets, Forever now, dear soul, you will dwell in my heart. Now, be still George, I heard your whisper . . . ____________________________ April 28, 2016 Poetry/Elegy/Whispering Old Cemetery Copyright Protected, ID 16-783-587-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Poem Written in April 2016 sponsor, Laura Loo First Place _____________________________________________ Written for a contest sponsor, Steven Henderson First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/15/2016 4:47:00 PM
By the way, I loved how you noticed stuff about him, like the Aquarius thing. So cool.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2016 4:46:00 PM
big congrats on a fantastic win. Don't think I ever saw this one before!!! gosh, what a picture!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2016 2:08:00 PM
so pleased to see this get a second chance in LuLoo's contest:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2016 11:31:00 AM
So enjoyed this write. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2016 11:27:00 AM
Broken Wings, just so touching and beautiful.. What a lovely story told...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2016 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations...this is so touching..today full of life and dressed to fashion and tomorrow lying in decay in a grave...:( Great reflection on life and death.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2016 2:34:00 PM
A very deep, emotional verse.... Congrats BW, for your first placement in the contest!! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2016 10:14:00 AM
Broken Wings, this is one of your very best writes I love it a 100% congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2016 10:25:00 AM
Eve, thanks , I often walk cemeteries, I know that sounds morbid but I find a lot of inspiration there~
Date: 6/30/2016 9:41:00 AM
Very deep and beautiful, Constance, stopping to pay tribute to an unknown and long-forgotten soul...hearing his whisper. I love this so much, and congratulations on your First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2016 10:23:00 AM
Sandra, thank you so much, my own words make me want to weep ~
Date: 4/30/2016 2:35:00 PM
Its been a while I visited.. I have also not been online for a while due to my work but I am back now and this piece is just the perfect start I need to come back home to my wonderful poetrysoup. This is amazing, beautiful and a high seven! Well done friend
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2016 11:37:00 PM
Funom, thanks for the compliment and the 7 ~
Date: 4/29/2016 9:44:00 AM
Deep and haunting...
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2016 2:11:00 PM
Tom, wonderful, just what I was going for !!
Date: 4/28/2016 6:41:00 PM
"George" stirred because someone remembered him! You've a unique gift Broken Wings! The best to you in this contest! :-)
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2016 6:43:00 PM
Walter, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~~

Book: Reflection on the Important Things