Whispering Night

In a strange 
environment under gross 
darkness and whispering 
night,I found myself with 
a companion.
 We walked an endless 
journey across the 
woods..eerie sounds we 
heard,a crack! then the 
undead resurrecting from 
marshes,we ran seeking 
for cover.
  These creatures howled 
as they drew near with 
blood dripped 
mouths,my fear 
deepened,I called out to 
my friend a flesh eater he 
became.
  Under the whispering 
night I stood alone, 
seemed the world stood 
still,as these monsters 
encircled me,I closed my 
eyes wishing I was not 
born.
   Suddenly,a bright light 
shone,dispersed 
darkness,repelled these 
zombies-then eerie noises 
ceased, and the world 
revolved once again. 
  A knock,I realized I 
drifted to sleep as my 
companion entered my 
car.
  We zoomed off towards 
the horizon under the 
bright sky.


Name:ifeanyi B. 
Ekechukwu.
Date:24/10/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/8/2013 4:38:00 PM
Maybe I said wrong about it winning more than once. But it looks like this one was recently judged. It well deserves a win!!
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:37:00 PM
gosh, this one is winning lots of contests in a short period of time. BIG congrats to you again!!!
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ifeanyi xx
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:57:00 AM
Congrats on the win,
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:39:00 AM
draws you in its a little scarey Bob good pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/30/2013 6:10:00 AM
That was a nightmare..I liked the ending..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:06:00 AM
good poem Ifeanyi congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:54:00 AM
congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:37:00 PM
Bob, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:10:00 PM
Never go near Zombieland without a companion. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:48:00 PM
looks like it won another contest. Big congrats.
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Date: 11/20/2013 4:53:00 PM
Bob. Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the win,
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:04:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Ifeanyi !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations my very dear friend I. Bob on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/13/2013 7:19:00 PM
I love the horror and the suspense in this poem! Amazing writing, Bob! Really good work!...Many thanks for the great comments. I appreciate it very much! :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Bob! All the best my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:08:00 PM
hey, this is a really neato poem on zombies. I see it won too. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:05:00 PM
stopping by to wish you congratulations on your fine win :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:43:00 AM
Congrats on the win,
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:13:00 PM
Bob, Congratulations on your awesome Halloween win. Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:21:00 PM
wow...you tell this zombie tale well...scary stuff, very well written poem...good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/5/2013 8:54:00 AM
Wow! Great creepy write my dear friend! Can't help not to comment although I've read our very dear friend PD's comment below. So, this is for my contest? ;))))). Thanks in advance! thanks so much as well for your kind visit and lovely comments on my poem. Have a grace-filled day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:28:00 AM
Nice one Ifeanyi. God's light in us will always disperse darkness...Kechi
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Date: 10/30/2013 9:30:00 PM
Hello BOB, wow.... loving this eerie, and awesome... wishing you luck in sweet Leo's zombie contest... LINDA
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