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Whispering My Thoughts

~ Cotton candy clouds adrift upon these twilight autumn skies Silently in colors formed, taking breaths and casting sighs Aglow, a moon of muted light above these branches, rests in wait Reaching o’er the final glimpse of this hour getting late Here I stare in wishful views wondering on scattered winds Shall this spell of moonlit phase find you dreaming once again A’ dance upon your waking heart soft of light and chilled caress Of these miles we stand apart filled with hope and lone confess Captured moments, sorted time found entwined of this we see As a fragile silhouette wafting through so endlessly Hear my voice, it calls your name echoes of a promise true Far beyond this stardust night whispering my thoughts to you ~

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Dawne Zacharias

Date: 10/26/2019 10:45:00 PM

Veriy nice flow and message, a good feeling in this poem friend.

Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so very much Dawne. I am happy you liked this.

Ann Foster

Date: 10/21/2019 9:20:00 PM

Lovely. Very...beautiful. Ann

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/21/2019 9:33:00 AM

Gorgeous Chris! What else can be said?;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Brenda for your kind words to me.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/21/2019 9:04:00 AM

So beautiful Chris :-) Another Gem! X

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Elaine.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2019 5:38:00 PM

so beautiful and romantic and I love the new avatar - i will always hide and be a dragonfly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I decided that I have been here long enough, I might as well show myself. I'll probably scare every one off now.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/20/2019 12:52:00 PM

Yet another masterpiece magnifique! A poem to roam and revel in. Thank you, Chris! Poetry joy, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your constant support and kindness. I appreciate you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/20/2019 8:27:00 AM

Charming and romantic as always, Chris:) absolutely enjoyed:)

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM

Hey there my friend. It is so nice to see you again. Thank you so very much.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/19/2019 11:50:00 PM

Oh Chris this is absolutely lovely. Words fail. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Judy so very much.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/19/2019 9:28:00 PM

Ohhhhhhhhh, just ohhhhhhh, the things your can write. Things is not an adequate word but I'm tired - wore myself out getting excited about the face. Beautiful penning - me thinks your an old soul that kept your old pen. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. That face is blushing right now.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/19/2019 9:26:00 PM

I am not going to whisper my current thoughts - YOUR FACE IS SHOWING - and what a face it is. I've waited so long for you to turn around that I got excited. I'll calm down and read the poem. Nice to meet your face! The Crazy Lady

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:51:00 AM

: )

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2019 8:38:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Chris, especially the 5th verse.

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Harry

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/19/2019 2:06:00 PM

Passionate and sensuous - a talented poem of longing and romance. Awesome poem Chris, Hugs, Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer for your nice comment. I appreciate your visit and kindness.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/19/2019 1:08:00 PM

This is so wonderfully romantic! Great job Panagiota xxx

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/19/2019 1:06:00 PM

Just stunning writing Chris, I loved every word, your romanticism is on full display in this gem! Great Avatar BTW

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thank my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/19/2019 11:33:00 AM

I can relate to this beautiful poem. So nice to read today! Keep up the great writing Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thank you for always being so nice to me Heidi.

Midnight Aurora

Date: 10/19/2019 11:02:00 AM

Now this is a poem! Very romantic. I enjoyed it very much.

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/18/2019 10:41:00 PM

Wow your muse was singing so many beautiful melodies today. Another gorgeous poem that again has me mesmerized by your words and left sighing ... I hope your pen never runs dry your words are always so beautiful and I love to savor your poetry ... :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sandy. I feel exactly the same way about your work. You humble me with your wonderful comments

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2019 9:55:00 PM

this is so romantic, Chris, a poet :) I love it a fav. Hugs Eve

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eve.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/18/2019 8:36:00 PM

Beautiful Chris! Poetically beautiful! To be able to to write"beautiful" as you do. I can only wish.

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:46:00 AM

My friend, you do write beautifully. Don't underestimate your talent, I find you a wonderful poetess. Thank you so much.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/18/2019 7:33:00 PM

Beautiful... Blessings, Gina

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much Gina.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/18/2019 6:43:00 PM

Sweet dreams, Mr. Eagle!

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:45:00 AM

More like a nightmare this morning. : ) Thanks my Cowboy friend.

Hello There

Date: 10/18/2019 5:51:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful ~ but funny, just a few moments ago I was literally staring at this autumn sky, taking breaths, casting sighs and just wishing I could tell you about it in words... I'm not sure I have them, but I love reading yours ~

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:44:00 AM

Oh, I'm sure you have them. Your poetry is always so beautiful. Thank you for your kindness my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.