Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Whispering My Thoughts

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Cotton candy clouds adrift
upon these twilight autumn skies
Silently in colors formed,
taking breaths and casting sighs

Aglow, a moon of muted light
above these branches, rests in wait
Reaching o’er the final glimpse
of this hour getting late

Here I stare in wishful views
wondering on scattered winds
Shall this spell of moonlit phase
find you dreaming once again 

A’ dance upon your waking heart
soft of light and chilled caress
Of these miles we stand apart
filled with hope and lone confess

Captured moments, sorted time
found entwined of this we see
As a fragile silhouette
wafting through so endlessly

Hear my voice, it calls your name
echoes of a promise true
Far beyond this stardust night
whispering my thoughts to you

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Dawne Zacharias October 26, 2019 at 10:45 PM Veriy nice flow and message, a good feeling in this poem friend. Chris Green October 28, 2019 at 8:04 AM Thank you so very much Dawne. I am happy you liked this.

Ann Foster October 21, 2019 at 9:20 PM Lovely. Very...beautiful. Ann Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:43 AM Thank you so much Ann.

Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 9:33 AM Gorgeous Chris! What else can be said?;) Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thank you so much Brenda for your kind words to me.

Elaine Perrin October 21, 2019 at 9:04 AM So beautiful Chris :-) Another Gem! X Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you so much Elaine.

Jan Allison October 20, 2019 at 5:38 PM so beautiful and romantic and I love the new avatar - i will always hide and be a dragonfly lol:-) hugs Jan xx Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:54 AM Thanks Jan, I decided that I have been here long enough, I might as well show myself. I'll probably scare every one off now.

Gershon Wolf October 20, 2019 at 12:52 PM Yet another masterpiece magnifique! A poem to roam and revel in. Thank you, Chris! Poetry joy, Gershon Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:53 AM Thanks my friend for your constant support and kindness. I appreciate you.

Joanna Daniel October 20, 2019 at 8:27 AM Charming and romantic as always, Chris:) absolutely enjoyed:) Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:52 AM Hey there my friend. It is so nice to see you again. Thank you so very much.

Judy Ball October 19, 2019 at 11:50 PM Oh Chris this is absolutely lovely. Words fail. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:52 AM Thank you Judy so very much.

CayCay Godwin October 19, 2019 at 9:28 PM Ohhhhhhhhh, just ohhhhhhh, the things your can write. Things is not an adequate word but I'm tired - wore myself out getting excited about the face. Beautiful penning - me thinks your an old soul that kept your old pen. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:52 AM Thank you so much my friend. That face is blushing right now.

CayCay Godwin October 19, 2019 at 9:26 PM I am not going to whisper my current thoughts - YOUR FACE IS SHOWING - and what a face it is. I've waited so long for you to turn around that I got excited. I'll calm down and read the poem. Nice to meet your face! The Crazy Lady Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:51 AM : )

Harry Horsman October 19, 2019 at 8:38 PM Beautiful poetry, Chris, especially the 5th verse. Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:51 AM Thanks so much Harry

Jennifer Proxenos October 19, 2019 at 2:06 PM Passionate and sensuous - a talented poem of longing and romance. Awesome poem Chris, Hugs, Jennifer. Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:50 AM Thank you Jennifer for your nice comment. I appreciate your visit and kindness.

Panagiota Romios October 19, 2019 at 1:08 PM This is so wonderfully romantic! Great job Panagiota xxx Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:50 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton October 19, 2019 at 1:06 PM Just stunning writing Chris, I loved every word, your romanticism is on full display in this gem! Great Avatar BTW Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thank my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

Heidi Sands October 19, 2019 at 11:33 AM I can relate to this beautiful poem. So nice to read today! Keep up the great writing Chris :) Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thank you for always being so nice to me Heidi.

Midnight Aurora October 19, 2019 at 11:02 AM Now this is a poem! Very romantic. I enjoyed it very much. Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Sandra Adams October 18, 2019 at 10:41 PM Wow your muse was singing so many beautiful melodies today. Another gorgeous poem that again has me mesmerized by your words and left sighing ... I hope your pen never runs dry your words are always so beautiful and I love to savor your poetry ... :) hugs Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:48 AM Thank you so very much Sandy. I feel exactly the same way about your work. You humble me with your wonderful comments

Eve Roper October 18, 2019 at 9:55 PM this is so romantic, Chris, a poet :) I love it a fav. Hugs Eve Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:46 AM Thank you so very much Eve.

Regina Mcintosh October 18, 2019 at 7:33 PM Beautiful... Blessings, Gina Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:45 AM Thank you so very much Gina.

Sunlite Wanter October 18, 2019 at 6:43 PM Sweet dreams, Mr. Eagle! Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:45 AM More like a nightmare this morning. : ) Thanks my Cowboy friend.

Hello There October 18, 2019 at 5:51 PM Absolutely beautiful ~ but funny, just a few moments ago I was literally staring at this autumn sky, taking breaths, casting sighs and just wishing I could tell you about it in words... I'm not sure I have them, but I love reading yours ~ Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 8:44 AM Oh, I'm sure you have them. Your poetry is always so beautiful. Thank you for your kindness my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.