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Whispering My Thoughts

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Cotton candy clouds adrift
upon these twilight autumn skies
Silently in colors formed,
taking breaths and casting sighs

Aglow, a moon of muted light
above these branches, rests in wait
Reaching o’er the final glimpse
of this hour getting late

Here I stare in wishful views
wondering on scattered winds
Shall this spell of moonlit phase
find you dreaming once again 

A’ dance upon your waking heart
soft of light and chilled caress
Of these miles we stand apart
filled with hope and lone confess

Captured moments, sorted time
found entwined of this we see
As a fragile silhouette
wafting through so endlessly

Hear my voice, it calls your name
echoes of a promise true
Far beyond this stardust night
whispering my thoughts to you

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Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2019

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Dawne Zacharias Date: 10/26/2019 10:45:00 PM Veriy nice flow and message, a good feeling in this poem friend. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/28/2019 8:04:00 AM Thank you so very much Dawne. I am happy you liked this.

Ann Foster Date: 10/21/2019 9:20:00 PM Lovely. Very...beautiful. Ann Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/22/2019 8:43:00 AM Thank you so much Ann.

Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 9:33:00 AM Gorgeous Chris! What else can be said?;) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 9:50:00 AM Thank you so much Brenda for your kind words to me.

Elaine Perrin Date: 10/21/2019 9:04:00 AM So beautiful Chris :-) Another Gem! X Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 9:23:00 AM Thank you so much Elaine.

Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2019 5:38:00 PM so beautiful and romantic and I love the new avatar - i will always hide and be a dragonfly lol:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:54:00 AM Thanks Jan, I decided that I have been here long enough, I might as well show myself. I'll probably scare every one off now.

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/20/2019 12:52:00 PM Yet another masterpiece magnifique! A poem to roam and revel in. Thank you, Chris! Poetry joy, Gershon Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:53:00 AM Thanks my friend for your constant support and kindness. I appreciate you.

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/20/2019 8:27:00 AM Charming and romantic as always, Chris:) absolutely enjoyed:) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM Hey there my friend. It is so nice to see you again. Thank you so very much.

Judy Ball Date: 10/19/2019 11:50:00 PM Oh Chris this is absolutely lovely. Words fail. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM Thank you Judy so very much.

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/19/2019 9:28:00 PM Ohhhhhhhhh, just ohhhhhhh, the things your can write. Things is not an adequate word but I'm tired - wore myself out getting excited about the face. Beautiful penning - me thinks your an old soul that kept your old pen. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM Thank you so much my friend. That face is blushing right now.

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/19/2019 9:26:00 PM I am not going to whisper my current thoughts - YOUR FACE IS SHOWING - and what a face it is. I've waited so long for you to turn around that I got excited. I'll calm down and read the poem. Nice to meet your face! The Crazy Lady Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:51:00 AM : )

Harry Horsman Date: 10/19/2019 8:38:00 PM Beautiful poetry, Chris, especially the 5th verse. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:51:00 AM Thanks so much Harry

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/19/2019 2:06:00 PM Passionate and sensuous - a talented poem of longing and romance. Awesome poem Chris, Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:50:00 AM Thank you Jennifer for your nice comment. I appreciate your visit and kindness.

Panagiota Romios Date: 10/19/2019 1:08:00 PM This is so wonderfully romantic! Great job Panagiota xxx Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:50:00 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton Date: 10/19/2019 1:06:00 PM Just stunning writing Chris, I loved every word, your romanticism is on full display in this gem! Great Avatar BTW Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:49:00 AM Thank my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

Heidi Sands Date: 10/19/2019 11:33:00 AM I can relate to this beautiful poem. So nice to read today! Keep up the great writing Chris :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:49:00 AM Thank you for always being so nice to me Heidi.

Midnight Aurora Date: 10/19/2019 11:02:00 AM Now this is a poem! Very romantic. I enjoyed it very much. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:49:00 AM Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Sandra Adams Date: 10/18/2019 10:41:00 PM Wow your muse was singing so many beautiful melodies today. Another gorgeous poem that again has me mesmerized by your words and left sighing ... I hope your pen never runs dry your words are always so beautiful and I love to savor your poetry ... :) hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:48:00 AM Thank you so very much Sandy. I feel exactly the same way about your work. You humble me with your wonderful comments

Eve Roper Date: 10/18/2019 9:55:00 PM this is so romantic, Chris, a poet :) I love it a fav. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:46:00 AM Thank you so very much Eve.

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 10/18/2019 8:36:00 PM Beautiful Chris! Poetically beautiful! To be able to to write"beautiful" as you do. I can only wish. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:46:00 AM My friend, you do write beautifully. Don't underestimate your talent, I find you a wonderful poetess. Thank you so much.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/18/2019 7:33:00 PM Beautiful... Blessings, Gina Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:45:00 AM Thank you so very much Gina.

Sunlite Wanter Date: 10/18/2019 6:43:00 PM Sweet dreams, Mr. Eagle! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:45:00 AM More like a nightmare this morning. : ) Thanks my Cowboy friend.

Hello There Date: 10/18/2019 5:51:00 PM Absolutely beautiful ~ but funny, just a few moments ago I was literally staring at this autumn sky, taking breaths, casting sighs and just wishing I could tell you about it in words... I'm not sure I have them, but I love reading yours ~ Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 8:44:00 AM Oh, I'm sure you have them. Your poetry is always so beautiful. Thank you for your kindness my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.