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Whispering Leaves

Autumn leaves whisper my name Follow me, follow me They dance playfully down the path A gust of wind creates a smile Golden leaves, kissed by the sun Fiery orange leaves Unraveled, undone Resting amber leaves Resting peacefully Sexy, sultry, seducing Whispering my name Follow me, follow me They lead me down the path Down the path of despair Darkness, cold, desolation I hear laughter in the distance Evil, eerie, deceptive I feel a chill through my bones To the core of my soul The leaves have disappeared Down the path I can’t see them anymore My heart is heavy My soul is empty The path is lonely The leaves deceived me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/19/2015 8:23:00 AM
I enjoyed this, well done, you write with the emotion that haunts the soul..in a good way.
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:17:00 PM
Lovely, lovely poem Noreen! It's beautiful how you've used the leaves to explore the sense of emotions. Nice!
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:53:00 PM
NOREEN, CONGRATS !! In my sisters, brokenness' contest.. xox~PD
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Date: 10/25/2012 7:07:00 AM
Thanks to all for your encouraging comments and I won! That is awesome!
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Date: 10/25/2012 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poen winning in ~SKAT's "Brokenness" contest Noreen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:11:00 AM
Big congrats Noreen xx
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:05:00 AM
CONGRATS NOREEN ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/23/2012 11:52:00 AM
Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Noreen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:35:00 AM
I really like this- well done
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:55:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Noreen. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2012 5:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem today.
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