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Whispering Adieu

For the time has come for Summer to fade, warmth whispers adieu as crimson ascends- Blades begin to fall in a serenade, and all the beauty of Autumn transcends. Corn maize at Queens County Farm Museum, sipping warm apple cider by the fire- Embers ignite aglow finding freedom, and all us family begins to tire. Caramel apples with pumpkin picking- Stacks of hay surround a house that’s haunted, for Halloween is time for fun tricking. The neighbors decorated and flaunted! The loveliness of Autumn has spoken… whispers adieu when Winter’s awoken. October 22, 2019 New Fall Sonnets Poetry Contest Emile Pinet

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/27/2019 2:48:00 PM

A delight my finding this exquisite sonnet you have gifted us my friend. I love sonnets and this one is a true beauty, a finely crafted and exceptional piece! Depth, imagery, rhyming and flow all perfectly on the mark. Good luck in the contest, as this must surely be a podium finishing piece. A fav-- a truly great sonnet!

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:49:00 AM

wow thank you so much! It means so much coming from the sonnet king! You are a blessing and don't let anyone tell you otherwise :)-luloo

Constance La France

Date: 10/24/2019 3:46:00 PM

Lu, beautifully penned in your perfect style and mood !

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:48:00 AM

thanks sweet Dear Heart, you are always so sweet :)-luloo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/23/2019 8:20:00 AM

Such a lovely write, Laura... I love it. God bless you, sweet lady... Gina

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:48:00 AM

thank you again! I feel I don't deserve your kindness everyday. Thank you so much RR :)-luloo

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/22/2019 8:16:00 PM

Beautiful Laura! Lol what can I say your amazing!;)

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:47:00 AM

oh stop- thanks Brilliant Brenda (sorry I love making up names for people- OCD thing I think lol... if it bothers you I'll stop :) be blessed :)-luloo

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/22/2019 6:27:00 PM

you have awakened the memory of the Autumn of my youth dear poet

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:46:00 AM

awww thank you so much dear Frederic :)-luloo

Chris Green

Date: 10/22/2019 11:26:00 AM

This is beautiful Luloo. We have a corn maze down here but it just doesn't feel the same when it is 90 degrees outside. : ) No sitting around the fire here.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:46:00 AM

yeah we here in Michigan get Autumn bonfires, it's awesome having 4 seasons. Thank you once again Chris for your kind comments. :)-luloo

Bobby May

Date: 10/22/2019 10:29:00 AM

I think your dictionary has different words Lu Loo oops, I am using my first grade one, my bad!! you are amazing my friend!!

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2019 10:45:00 AM

don't be silly...thank you dear Bobby! :)-luloo