Whispering

silently blowing
in a bated breath
magically
i whisper 
in the breeze
my dearest
bowled over
amazing beautiful

far away 
in a starry sky
the heart 
just missed 
a beat

a feeling
within one's breath
did you 
just kiss
my soul

coming out 
in mist
with the sweetest
most beautiful words
a soul 
of such beauty

shining at
the rainbows end
my god
never let 
one see
those beautiful eyes

tipping one's hat
i smile to you
if ever i did
i would adore
the light
within the candle

you hypnotize 
my dreams
melting in the deepest
embracing one;s soul
one with yours
beyond words

the soul flies 
in the spirit
ocean waves
crashing onto 
the cliffs
kissing you passionately
tonight i dream
its you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 2:15 AM
This beautiful poem i read already..Somehow whilst rereading it I realize my comment didn t pass through...So i re write my thoughts..This is my fav of favourites..and there it goes.An ardent whisper so mesmerizing and carrying so much emotion.Excellent!
Deschler Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:23 PM
This poem is very tender and passionate. You seem to write poetry so effortlessly! The talent you have is a dream come true! Wonderful work, Liam, I enjoyed it very much!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 4:42 AM
thank you for the wonderful comment kelly deeply appreciated
Neels Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 7:21 AM
Liam, this is a beauty, especially love the ending.. :)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 4:47 AM
wilma thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:23 AM
Very passionate and warm....Dreams are sometimes the only reality one can ever know...Lovely
Mcdaid Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 7:14 AM
that is quite true eileen the reason being they never came true so we keep dreaming until one finds the dream
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