John Gondolf Poet Alliteration

Whispered Words

Whispered Words

Whispered words waft through the shadows,
spoken low by luscious lips;
tempting teases to the senses
spurred by Steele’s most steamy scripts.

Whispered words ‘neath weeping willows,
meekly veiled by midnight’s mist;
mentions of those magic moments,
luscious lips so lightly kissed.

Whispered words weave hearts with wonder
melding moments lush with love;
binding bodies soft in shadows
‘neath the mystic moon above.


May 16, 2024

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Brandy Nicole March 15, 2026 at 6:54 AM Yes, ' whispered words weave hearts, melding moments with lush love. ' More like a soft, sweet melody shared between them. A beautiful, forever love. : ) John Gondolf March 16, 2026 at 2:34 AM Thank you for revisiting this verse and sharing your thoughts. Hugs, John

Ellen Gwaltney Bales October 15, 2024 at 3:49 PM What a very sensuous poem, John. It brings to mind many visuals--nice! Ellen John Gondolf October 21, 2024 at 2:46 AM Thank you, Ellen, I’m glad it brought these moments to mind. John

Karen Jones August 6, 2024 at 5:30 AM Wow I’m in awe at the beautiful skill in which you present alliteration and imagery. A pleasure to read! Thanks for sharing! John Gondolf August 6, 2024 at 6:18 AM Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Karen, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John

James Horn June 20, 2024 at 6:34 AM Outstanding poem. If you get a chance, read my Willie Mays poem that I just wrote. John Gondolf June 20, 2024 at 6:48 AM Thanks James, I appreciate it.

Shane Thacker May 18, 2024 at 7:15 PM Wonderful alliteration, John. It's nicely written and true to form. Well done! John Gondolf May 19, 2024 at 5:46 AM Thanks so much Shane, I appreciate your comments.

Brandy Nicole May 17, 2024 at 6:26 PM ' Whispered words weave hearts with wonder. ' I completely agree, my dear friend. When a connection is made along the wind, it's beautiful in every way. Magical is the best way to describe the feeling within. Your thoughts are so dreamy and romantic, with a hint of passion. I'm placing this in my favorites to read again and again. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf May 18, 2024 at 7:09 AM Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my Whispered Words my dear friend. Moments such as these are truly magical. Hugs, John