Whispered Reminder

Every breath that I breathe... brings a scented breeze filled with love, floating between each crystalline snowflake on a chilled winter’s eve, swirling through autumn’s painted leaves coating the earth in beauty, warmed by spring’s eternal flow of jasmine petal fragrance, soften while meandering along a secluded beach skimming waves in rhythmic sonnets beneath palm leaf dances purified by the sun of summers past, returning to me as a whispered reminder that... you are every breath that I breathe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 1, 2016 at 11:49 AM
So much eloquence and beauty in these images, a breath of jasmine air.
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November 1, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thanks so much Paloma. I appreciate your nice comments and I am happy you liked this one.
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November 1, 2016 at 3:45 AM
Oops you see I forgot..had to add rating nw :)
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November 1, 2016 at 6:01 AM
:)
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November 1, 2016 at 3:44 AM
This is a magic bliss...This breathing breeze in each verse..whispers love through all four seasons..The love poet deserves A favourite and a seven..I always skip ratings ..but gonna give both.: ) Charma.
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November 1, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. What a nice thing to say.
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October 31, 2016 at 11:28 PM
ohhh, you breathe love and sweet passion, chris.. you go, guy!.. this is really superb.. huggs
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November 1, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Nette for all of your kindness.
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October 31, 2016 at 9:15 PM
WoW! Chris this is so romantic. I felt the deep affection in each word.I enjoy partaking of your poetry. Well done my friend. An undeniable seven:-) Alexis
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November 1, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis, you are too kind.
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October 31, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Wow Chris . Beautiful. I like the line ...beneath palm leaf dances and the ending is perfect.
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November 1, 2016 at 5:59 AM
Thank you so much Heidi, I am glad you did. :)
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October 31, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Wow, Chris! Skimming waves in rhythmic sonnets beneath palm leaf dances. Love it mate.
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October 31, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Thanks so much Rick. I appreciate your visit and kind words to me tonight. Thank you again for your friendship and your kindness
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