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Whispered Reminder

Every breath that I breathe... brings a scented breeze filled with love, floating between each crystalline snowflake on a chilled winter’s eve, swirling through autumn’s painted leaves coating the earth in beauty, warmed by spring’s eternal flow of jasmine petal fragrance, soften while meandering along a secluded beach skimming waves in rhythmic sonnets beneath palm leaf dances purified by the sun of summers past, returning to me as a whispered reminder that... you are every breath that I breathe

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Paloma P

Date: 11/1/2016 11:49:00 AM

So much eloquence and beauty in these images, a breath of jasmine air.

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 11:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Paloma. I appreciate your nice comments and I am happy you liked this one.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/1/2016 3:45:00 AM

Oops you see I forgot..had to add rating nw :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 6:01:00 AM

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/1/2016 3:44:00 AM

This is a magic bliss...This breathing breeze in each verse..whispers love through all four seasons..The love poet deserves A favourite and a seven..I always skip ratings ..but gonna give both.: ) Charma.

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 6:01:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend. What a nice thing to say.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/31/2016 11:28:00 PM

ohhh, you breathe love and sweet passion, chris.. you go, guy!.. this is really superb.. huggs

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Nette for all of your kindness.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/31/2016 9:15:00 PM

WoW! Chris this is so romantic. I felt the deep affection in each word.I enjoy partaking of your poetry. Well done my friend. An undeniable seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 6:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much Alexis, you are too kind.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/31/2016 8:43:00 PM

Wow Chris . Beautiful. I like the line ...beneath palm leaf dances and the ending is perfect.

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 5:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi, I am glad you did. :)

White Wolf

Date: 10/31/2016 8:18:00 PM

Wow, Chris! Skimming waves in rhythmic sonnets beneath palm leaf dances. Love it mate.

Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 8:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Rick. I appreciate your visit and kind words to me tonight. Thank you again for your friendship and your kindness