Whispered Ecstasy

If The Gods conspire against us,
I shall defy them.
Your loyalty buys a river of rewards.
A purchase shall be made with love.

The night will bring my caring hands
to your desired body, separating
 your sheer garments from aroused
and glowing skin.

The cold nights we can transform
to the pleasurable warmth
of passionate embrace,
your kiss a spark upon me. 

I will whisper those erotic words
a breath away from your intent ears.
Soak in your fountain I will
with lasting glory.

Bring your ecstasy filled eyes to mine.
So I may revel in your euphoria,
and drown in conjoined bliss.
This world can and will not stop us.

Heaven will know that we are one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/30/2011 8:08:00 AM
wow this gave me goosebumps :)
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:49:00 PM
What a touchy and moving expressions quite deep yet meaningful, Michael
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:33:00 PM
Michael, wow the chemicals are over flowing !! I had to read this very careful, this is one awesome poem,,, well enjoyed,..Linda
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Date: 5/29/2011 1:14:00 PM
intense and dramatic piece with emotional edges to tempt the reader into the expressions of your creativity Michael.. super one..
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:49:00 AM
Bravo my friend.... very nice.....MJF
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:20:00 AM
a beautiful evocation of intimacy, very well written...
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:48:00 AM
This is the earnest desire for every woman . . . Brought tears . . . 'Your loyalty buys a river of rewards ' very very deep lines . You are a marvellous poet and always my favourate .
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:40:00 AM
Loved the line 'your kiss a spark upon me'. A poem filled with passion and sensuality. Enjoyed reading. Emilia
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:26:00 AM
I love this..Great pen full of emotional sensual.. Smiles :)
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