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Whispered

uttered fluttered stuttered muttered heard on his breath uttered fluttered dove whispered timid stuttered muttered love AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on September 7, 2018 for PREMIERE CONTEST 175 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on May 12, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/14/2018 8:16:00 AM

Sh! To get the full essence of this poem, it must be whispered.....low....lower...lower.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2018 9:38:00 AM

Brilliant - you are so correct, Caren. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 2:54:00 PM

Cool one. This is a very difficult form to do, as I recall.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2018 9:38:00 AM

Difficult to have it make sense... LOL

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/13/2018 9:43:00 AM

so descriptive of soft shy whispers!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/13/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thanks, Michelle. This is an odd poetry form that is difficult to pull off elegantly. It can be done but my muse took me here. Our creations can't all be spectacularly awesome. LOL