Whispered

uttered fluttered stuttered muttered heard on his breath uttered fluttered dove whispered timid stuttered muttered love
AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Sh! To get the full essence of this poem, it must be whispered.....low....lower...lower.
Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Brilliant - you are so correct, Caren. Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Cool one. This is a very difficult form to do, as I recall.
Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Difficult to have it make sense... LOL
Faulkner Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:43 AM
so descriptive of soft shy whispers!
Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Thanks, Michelle. This is an odd poetry form that is difficult to pull off elegantly. It can be done but my muse took me here. Our creations can't all be spectacularly awesome. LOL
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