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Whisper of Your Silence

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Lonely I walk through the walls of crowds Reach out but like shadows they don’t connect Their eyes are vacant cold and empty Ghostly people walk on by crossing my path As I head back home in wonted despair Where I find solace in the whisper of your silence I can always count on you Your soothing presence tangible Your embrace warm and lingering As familiar as an old lover’s embrace The feeling hovering Haunts me ever so gently Tired of wandering alone It’s soothing to find you here Loneliness serenely dark and faithful Wrapped in the warmth of your caress I find solace in the whisper of your silence Read on air by invitation ~ April 12, 2020 'LATE NIGHT POETS' AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on July 27, 2019 for contest SOUND OF SILENCE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 10TH

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Date: 8/13/2019 5:59:00 PM
Wow Line, I don't know how it was possible for him to judge this contest! The entries are all so beautiful yet uniquely different as yours is. You have beautifully conveyed your interpretation of the song. Congratulations on your most deserving win! : ) xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Connie. I am behind on reading contest winners. Hoping to catch up soon.
Date: 8/6/2019 9:09:00 AM
I love the last three lines especially. Congrats on your placement. Glad to see this poem recognized!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/6/2019 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your well deserved win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 5:01:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal.
Date: 8/5/2019 7:01:00 PM
You are welcome. I wrote one that didn’t make the list but you might enjoy it. Do drop by for a visit.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 8:27:00 PM
Your poem was wonderful, Richard. That is why I don't do premiere contests anymore.
Date: 8/5/2019 1:59:00 PM
Terrific win! Congrats.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard.
Date: 8/5/2019 1:02:00 PM
This so good Line, congrats on placing in my difficult contest, so many great poems were left out but yours made the cut!
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Date: 8/1/2019 8:51:00 AM
I like the mood and feel of this piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/30/2019 9:47:00 PM
Well written. I cant be silent about this one.
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Date: 7/31/2019 3:37:00 AM
Thanks, LOL.
Date: 7/30/2019 5:49:00 AM
Beautifully poignant Line, thank you. Sending love and kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2019 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ann.
Date: 7/28/2019 10:06:00 AM
in today's world people don't connect anymore, even when gathered together most are buried in their gadgets! Good take on the contest Line, I enjoyed reading this one today :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2019 11:09:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

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