Whisper Hello

Sweet flower tree whispers hello 
Walking past she interrupted...
 
Glorifying wings of spring on her branches
Marveling her purple paper star shower
Inhaling her peaceful unlocked power 
My spirit has lifted....
 
"Hello, I whisper back, 
"Thanks for interrupting!"






^(How a tree made me feel today)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/18/2009 1:10:00 AM
Jane, I love the imagery. If we indeed look at the surroundings, inspiration comes. Yes, there is an isnpiration from the trees, from the air, from the flowers, from the bees and butterflies. I love your poem. Ernilando
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Date: 3/24/2009 5:55:00 AM
do u gather your creativity from things around you because sadly most of my poetry is from love and relationships ,truly the earth is bound to be my muse.
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Date: 3/20/2009 9:17:00 AM
wonderfully in tune every moment with nature, trully a magical way to live! great! Jim
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Date: 3/19/2009 7:38:00 PM
How wonderfully you describe the tree's power to lift your spirits! What a great source of inspiration they provide, don't they?
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Date: 3/19/2009 4:31:00 AM
This is beautiful personification..love how the tree come alive..well done.
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Date: 3/18/2009 6:46:00 AM
Such beauty in this image Jane 'her purple paper star shower'Excellent Rgds Brin & thanks for your welcome observations
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Date: 3/18/2009 2:07:00 AM
They do that, don't they? a beautifullly perfect write for a tree. love, Kristin
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Date: 3/17/2009 6:40:00 PM
Awesome! It is wonderful how nature can lift the spirit! Love the imagery. Smiles from Lolita
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