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"There are places I go to escape, to get back in touch with myself, and remember who I am. We all have that place I hope, whether it be an escape in your mind, a hobby, an activity, or an actual place that helps center you. This place I write about is mine, in the middle of the desert, among the ruins of my native ancestors. It’s calming and peaceful where the only noise I hear, is the animals wresting in the brush, and the wind whispering in my ears."
I’ve sat atop my boulders of woe, peering across a sun bit desert landscape, where clouds hung from its sky like cotton balls. Reflecting upon the years, they settled deep within the forsaken canyon carved within my chest. Here is my escape…my rest. I closed my eyes and let the ancient winds kiss my skin. “Breathe”, it said in a whisper, “and leave your troubles here. Resign your fear, for these boulders eventually will crumble too, and the woes that you carry soon will be few.” I did as my ancestors said, and left it all to erode, carrying away with me, a heart light with hope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/22/2023 12:29:00 AM
Your poems are beautiful - I've only just discovered them
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Date: 5/11/2021 7:44:00 PM
Love this
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Date: 5/10/2021 6:37:00 AM
Andreanna, this is a gorgeous poem. I really appreciate it and will mark it as one of my fav+ !!God bless you, Carol Louise
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:39:00 AM
This is the best poem I've read in a while and made me think about writing again. It's been such a long time for me. It's such a beautiful piece of work.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 10:42:00 AM
I am flattered, thank you. I am so happy my words could possibly inspire you to write again. I hope you do!
Date: 5/18/2020 3:26:00 PM
Beautiful write. Wisely written.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/18/2020 12:49:00 AM
This piece is so beautiful I can't even say more! Well done Andreanna.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/17/2020 10:41:00 PM
Andreanna, I was captivated by this writing today. This is good advice for pandemic 2020: Breathe, resign your fear, let the burden of your heart be lightened with hope. So glad I read this today, thank you! ~ John
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/29/2020 10:41:00 AM
Haha, indeed. Thank you!
Date: 9/1/2018 11:07:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Andreanna! Such transcendent thought waves emanating from your soul. A pen prismatic muse revival well-written. Supernova bright write. May love light your path in life always.
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Date: 6/12/2018 12:45:00 PM
Wonderful prose piece. It conveys a powerful message. Great pen.
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Date: 11/11/2017 4:14:00 AM
The desert is a great place to for escape. It has nothing and everything at the same time. I find the desert a perfect place for being alone. Please keep sharing your wonderful poems.
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:18:00 PM
This is a creative and amazing write; well done -JT
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Date: 8/16/2017 10:28:00 AM
Simply beautifully done.
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Date: 7/1/2017 9:31:00 AM
So nicely done! Your words paint images to the mind. Thank you for sharing, keep producing.
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Date: 6/28/2017 9:10:00 PM
You have talent indeed. You weave an engrossing tapestry of images and emotions. Beautifully worded.
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