Whisper



Quote By: Nat King Cole,  "You call it madness but I call it love "


A whisper of dreams landing on my pillow  
arriving on the nightstands of amber afterglows  
surrender to me and we'll take it nice and slow
gazing softly in each others eyes, by candle glow 
A whisper of dreams soaring like two eagles 
we will match our wings of glory to the seagulls 
then fly towards the moon with passion's equal 
in sotto voce voices, gleaned and culled
A whisper of dreams stitched by mere desire 
with every longing quenched we will retire  
to the mountain top where stars  suspire   
extracting from the sky an Angel's fire 

Burning every bridge we'll swivel up forever,       
like two matching weightless, downy feathers.

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Date: 4/23/2024 4:32:00 AM
Mystic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this spectacular poem, I love the quote too, Constance
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Date: 4/12/2024 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Whisper" write. Have a wonderful weekend.............
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Date: 4/12/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Paula for your gracious comment, love :)
Date: 4/9/2024 8:54:00 AM
Wow! Mystic, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Good quote by Nat King Cole as well( I loved his voice it was one of a kind). I found it be a masterpiece using the word " whisper". Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day-Alexis
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Date: 4/9/2024 1:00:00 AM
such a beautiful poem, xoxo
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Date: 4/8/2024 11:14:00 PM
beautiful Mystic and thank you for visiting my poem and commenting. The poems go off the list so quickly these days you hardly get chance to see them. i hope you are well xxx
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Date: 4/8/2024 10:43:00 AM
Dear rose, I absolutely love your use of refrain and the rhymes here too is so very unique and creative! And your poem flows seamlessly as always in such eloquence. I especially loved the lines “ A whisper of dreams soaring like two eagles we will match our wings of glory to the seagulls then fly towards the moon with passion's equal “ wow beautiful! Just stunning! You have a very imaginative way of expressing! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 4/8/2024 9:29:00 AM
Melodic and it is very relaxing. A beautiful poem!
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Date: 4/8/2024 8:30:00 AM
A lovely sonnet and nice idea for the refrain.. this is delicate and it rhymes and flows very well my friend..
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Date: 4/8/2024 6:06:00 AM
Dear Rose, your poem beautifully captures the essence of love and longing with eloquent imagery and tender emotion. Each line is filled with intimacy and passion, drawing the reader into a world of whispered dreams and shared desires. I loved the quote by Nat King Cole adds a poignant touch, enhancing the romantic atmosphere of the piece. This is an exquisite expression of affection and devotion. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful whispers of dreams, my friend. Adorned with splendid emotions, your poem captures the reader, Vienna.
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:20:00 AM
This is a beautifully written whisper of dreams Rose. Gotta love amber afterglows
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