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Whisper

on a magical dreamy morning of rain whispering pitter-patter, pitter-patter… restless wind rustling through falling leaves, murmuring softly stories from the past! cerulean clouds floating across luminous sky, fragrance from scented Jasmine swishes me away to childhood, drip-drop whisper by misty rain, resonates tender memories of endless joy! you whisper poignant soft words of love in a velvety voice, my ultimate happiness being with you, listening to raindrops, in tender togetherness, I am breathless! April 25, 2023

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Date: 5/1/2023 1:08:00 AM
A lovely moment of romace against the music of the rain falling pitter patter. Beautiful....
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/1/2023 5:40:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Valsa. We come from a country where Rainy is a major season. No wonder many of our romantic poems are related to rain. Your visit and your inspiring comments are delightful. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/26/2023 9:42:00 AM
A lovely write/story. I love the magical rain. We need some. Have a great/blessed day............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/1/2023 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Paula. Your visit is a delight.
Date: 4/26/2023 2:24:00 AM
- A quiet and pleasant rain, Mala - A lovely poem, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/26/2023 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Sunshine! Appreciate your visit and lovely comment.
Date: 4/25/2023 9:43:00 PM
So lovely and romantic, Mala:)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/26/2023 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. Your comment is appreciated.

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