Whisper

"His whisper  awakes the inner soul of  peace." Quote by poet

The Autumn breeze slightest breath whisper 
Sent a quiver across the countryside and still river.

Rest for a moment feeling the welcoming ambiance
With   a calm and perfect graceful nonchalance.

Perching mockingbirds sing pretty charm lullabies; 
Their weft threads carry underneath cloudless skies.

Awaking a feeling of unforgotten pleasant memories 
Sweet release devouring extraordinary treasuries.


4/23/2023

Writing Challenge - 'W' Words - Poetry Contest 9. whisper
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Smita Kulkarni

May 31, 2023 at 10:01 AM

Calming and beautiful poetry!

Bill Baker

May 5, 2023 at 8:56 PM

Is was a pleasure the enjoy your soothing poetry, Eve. A fine entry in the contest. Good luck, my friend. Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

April 30, 2023 at 5:57 AM

Eve, your nature poems are so breathtaking, i get goose pimples reading them, all your poems exquisite. Hugs, blessings my friend. Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2023 at 4:49 PM

gorgeous writing, dear. Congrats.

Constance La France

April 27, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and I like your quote !

Linda Alice Fowler

April 27, 2023 at 8:46 AM

The sweetest of whispers. I love it Eve. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sara Kendrick

April 27, 2023 at 3:52 AM

A very descriptive work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

April 26, 2023 at 8:35 PM

A very beautiful rhyme, written in the form of couplets. Congratulations!

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

April 26, 2023 at 8:05 PM

Lovely poem EVE Congratulations on your great win in the Contest

Alexis Y.

April 26, 2023 at 7:27 PM

Hi Eve, This is such a well-written write as well. Good use of the chosen word. I echo what Daniel said. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet

April 26, 2023 at 5:32 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith

April 26, 2023 at 2:07 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote. Have a great/blessed day..............

Kelly Deschler

April 26, 2023 at 10:32 AM

Beautifully penned, Eve ... Autumn is my favorite time of the year and this enchanting poem makes me yearn for its return... My best wishes for the contest!