Whisper

From my domain of desiccated wasteland, the dust soared on the wings of plundering wind, wafted across the burnt canopy of the lone magnolia tree, I nurtured with love for many years. The storm scraping the sands of the listless time, rose from the dusky horizon of distress, swept away the dislodged leaves. In their rustle I heard them whisper … “catch us before we disappear”. Through the dust of despair drifting nowhere, the last rays of the setting sun filtered, swathed the vestiges of the broken dreams, enveloped within the migrating mirage, that morphed into the leaves flying away. Across the melting shadow of the cloud adrift, through the golden glow of sunset, I trailed the course of the blowing wind to catch the fleeting leaves that took away all my dreams. Beneath the defoliated magnolia tree, at the fringe of my dried-up bare garden, as I stood with my dwindling present, I heard the rippling wind whisper to me… “you’ll catch them in the twilight terrain”. _______________ April 23. 2023 Word chosen : Whisper Contest : Writing Challenge - "W" Word Sponsored by : Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Subimal thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 6:46 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:50 PM
Thank you so much, SS.
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 4:02 AM
A very expressive and emotive work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Sara for your encouraging comment.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Whisper" write again. A lovely one. Have a great/blessed day.............
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:49 PM
Thank you, Paula for your encouraging comment.
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:31 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Subimal ... I really enjoy this ... “catch us before we disappear” :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:49 PM
Thank you, SS for liking the poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 9:51 AM
A lovely write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day..............
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:48 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 4:06 AM
Just love this :) God bless you. Love, Gina
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:48 PM
Thank you so much, Regina.
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