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Whisper

From my domain of desiccated wasteland, the dust soared on the wings of plundering wind, wafted across the burnt canopy of the lone magnolia tree, I nurtured with love for many years. The storm scraping the sands of the listless time, rose from the dusky horizon of distress, swept away the dislodged leaves. In their rustle I heard them whisper … “catch us before we disappear”. Through the dust of despair drifting nowhere, the last rays of the setting sun filtered, swathed the vestiges of the broken dreams, enveloped within the migrating mirage, that morphed into the leaves flying away. Across the melting shadow of the cloud adrift, through the golden glow of sunset, I trailed the course of the blowing wind to catch the fleeting leaves that took away all my dreams. Beneath the defoliated magnolia tree, at the fringe of my dried-up bare garden, as I stood with my dwindling present, I heard the rippling wind whisper to me… “you’ll catch them in the twilight terrain”. _______________ April 23. 2023 Word chosen : Whisper Contest : Writing Challenge - "W" Word Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 4/27/2023 12:15:00 PM
Subimal thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/27/2023 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Date: 4/27/2023 6:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/27/2023 10:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, SS.
Date: 4/27/2023 4:02:00 AM
A very expressive and emotive work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/27/2023 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Sara for your encouraging comment.
Date: 4/26/2023 2:15:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Whisper" write again. A lovely one. Have a great/blessed day.............
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Date: 4/27/2023 10:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paula for your encouraging comment.
Date: 4/23/2023 11:31:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Subimal ... I really enjoy this ... “catch us before we disappear” :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/27/2023 10:49:00 PM
Thank you, SS for liking the poem.
Date: 4/23/2023 9:51:00 AM
A lovely write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day..............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/27/2023 10:48:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 4/23/2023 4:06:00 AM
Just love this :) God bless you. Love, Gina
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/27/2023 10:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Regina.

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