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Whisper

oh -
prithee, my
darling ...
let me hear you whisper -
mold a heart with
those perfect bows ...
crimp them, coy and parted,
ever-so-slightly -
tenderly puff that
absinthe-sweet breath
upon this delicious
eventide air ...

kiss the charmed
twilight mist into my ear,
decorated by those
little words I yearn for -
send, soft, to my
tympans and my blood,
the sublime message that your eyes
have long betrayed ...
melt my marrow with your
wishes, hushed,
my skin awash
with bumps and blushes ...

kindle my core
in fits of fiery fury ...
my mind, a mad maelstrom of
fantasies and prayers,
and your sigh, the
most exquisite gulp of air
on which to float
that bewitching invitation,
that glorious gasp
of heaven -
that wondrous, wild,
wistful whisper ...

'I want you'






~ 1st Place ~ in the "Whispers" Poetry Contest, John Lawless, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 2:33 AM
Passionate lines penned in this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Gaul Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 2:13 PM
What a delicate description of desire. A glorious gasp, a gulp. The intricate mix of language and a raw breath of emotion makes this a step above the usual droll of poet's passion we see in romantic whispers. Greg, you've raised the bar dear bard. Congratulations.
Alex Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win!
Lindley Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 5:01 AM
My friend, the depths of this classically flavored and wonderfully composed masterpiece awes me! Such wondrous verses and smooth flow leads into a perfect finish of- " I want you". Now that is true and deep poetry. A fav- a masterpiece. God bless.
Sangster - K Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Nice to meet you Gregory. I can well see why your poem won. A beautiful piece. Well done and congratulations! :-) Cheers Anne
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations, Dear Poet. How beautiful! Can't imagine anything more enchanting! To my fave. Best wishes ~ Mala
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:35 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Barden Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:06 AM
Thank you kindly, Christuraj!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Lovely whispers... enchanting. God bless you always and Congrats on top win. Love, Gina
Barden Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:06 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Gina, it is very much appreciated! Blessings! :o) <3
Kauffman Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Such lovely whispers in absinthe-sweet breath, Greg. So romantic. Your lines melodically build anticipation until the crescendo is released in the last line! Congratulations on your win!
Barden Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:05 AM
Thank you so very much, Sam, that's kind of you to say ... I get few visits or comments here anymore, so it means a lot. Blessings - hope you are well! :o)
Sambourne Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 2:24 PM
A powerful, moving poem, Gregory, and a most deserving top placement. Congratulations! Brian
Barden Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:04 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Brian - I greatly appreciate it! Blessings! :o)
Lawless Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Never mind the "sweet nothings".....this was a "sweet something". Excellent work on line break pauses and gasps. thanks for entering the contest
Barden Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:03 AM
Oh, what an awesome surprise! I SO needed a boost today, John, and this means a lot ... I don't enter many contests anymore, so it's even MORE special when I do, and this poem is special to me for many reasons. A wonderful end to this really horrible day. Blessings and thanks, my friend! :o)
Leiser Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 3:01 PM
Your whispers are both exquisite and exotic, Greg! Outstanding poem! :)
Barden Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Oh, thank you so very much, Laura - I so appreciate the kind words! <3
Mcintosh Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 5:13 PM
WOW!!! So impressive. I rarely read something you've written without being fully impressed. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Barden Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 3:55 AM
That's very kind of you, Gina - thank you SO much, my friend! I don't get many visits anymore ... not sure I'll stay much longer. Blessings! :o) <3
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