Whisper

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I want to whisper to you...
at this very moment, 
Darling ...no mighty ocean in the world, 
no scary desert, no unwelcoming forest
can keep us apart, 
Because I have found you at last. 

The rustling fluttering leaves right in front of me, 
the demure white jasmine in the corner, 
the swaying fragrant petals in exuberance of their happiness, 
can’t hold their joy, but want to share, 
same as me - because I know, you and I have nothing to fear ....
I have found you at last.


          
                                         FIRST PLACE
                            All Yours (May 27) Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Kim Merryman

Date: 5/28/2021 4:04:00 PM

A lovely write, Mala! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

JCB Brul

Date: 5/27/2021 10:35:00 PM

So romantic dear Mala. Congratulations on your awesome win! This is a fave for me!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/28/2021 5:38:00 AM

Thanks, Dear JCB. This is a spontaneous one - short and simple. Love ~ Mala

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2021 2:41:00 PM

I like the contrast between the two stanzas, Mala...one scary, the other lovely and welcoming. Did I hear the word 'simplicity'....my type of poetry :) ~ Warm regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/27/2021 3:59:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. This is just my attempt at writing something with simple feelings...not really for any contest. Good to know..it's your type of poetry..like the sound of that! BW~ Mala