Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

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Whisper

I want to whisper to you...
at this very moment, 
Darling ...no mighty ocean in the world, 
no scary desert, no unwelcoming forest
can keep us apart, 
Because I have found you at last. 

The rustling fluttering leaves right in front of me, 
the demure white jasmine in the corner, 
the swaying fragrant petals in exuberance of their happiness, 
can’t hold their joy, but want to share, 
same as me - because I know, you and I have nothing to fear ....
I have found you at last.


          
                                         FIRST PLACE
                            All Yours (May 27) Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Kim Merryman May 28, 2021 at 4:04 PM A lovely write, Mala! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

JC Brul May 27, 2021 at 10:35 PM So romantic dear Mala. Congratulations on your awesome win! This is a fave for me! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 28, 2021 at 5:38 AM Thanks, Dear JCB. This is a spontaneous one - short and simple. Love ~ Mala

Paul Callus May 27, 2021 at 2:41 PM I like the contrast between the two stanzas, Mala...one scary, the other lovely and welcoming. Did I hear the word 'simplicity'....my type of poetry :) ~ Warm regards // paul Malabika Ray Choudhury May 27, 2021 at 3:59 PM Thanks, Paul. This is just my attempt at writing something with simple feelings...not really for any contest. Good to know..it's your type of poetry..like the sound of that! BW~ Mala

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2021 at 4:03 PM I love this. The simplicity and beauty of it. One of the best I have read today! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 24, 2021 at 4:08 PM Dear Andrea, so glad you liked this simple poem. Sometimes I love writing something very very simple.

L Milton Hankins May 24, 2021 at 4:00 PM Beautiful tribute to the love of your life, Malabika. Good writing! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 24, 2021 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Milton. Really appreciate your comment.

Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 3:54 PM How sweet and delightful! Excellent write, Mala. Malabika Ray Choudhury May 24, 2021 at 4:05 PM Thanks, Vijay. Really appreciate your comment.