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Whisper

The soil brittle and dry, desiccated in my wasteland, the dust soared high on the wings of summer wind, surging on the canopy of the lone magnolia tree, I nurtured with love for many years. The dust storm scraping the sands of listless time rose from the edge of the dusky horizon of strife, swept away the dislodged leaves. In their rustle I heard them whisper … “catch us, hold us before we disappear”. Through the dust of despair swirling to nowhere the last rays of the twilight sun filtered, its spectrum soaked the vestiges of soiled dreams, clutching them I chased the drifting mirage, that morphed into the fallen leaves, flying away from my defoliated magnolia tree, boughs then bare and unburdened. Across the melting shadows of the clouds adrift, through the golden beams of the setting sun, I soared on the wings of the wafting wind to catch the fleeting leaves that took away all my dreams, I blossomed in my magnolia tree. At the fringe of my garden’s fading landscape I heard the rippling wind whisper to me… “you’ll catch them beyond the twilight terrain”. _______________ Written : June 13, 2020 February 6, 2023 2022 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' FINAL Placement Poetry Contest Sponsor : Mark Toney

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Date: 6/18/2022 1:22:00 PM
Dear Subimal, I return with my heartiest congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest with this beautiful poem. Such splendor spills from your golden pen. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/17/2022 1:21:00 PM
Hi, Subimal. Your "Whisper" is very thought-provoking. I read it over and over again, each time gaining a fuller sense of its meaning--of course from my perspective. I love your use of the "lone magnolia tree" throughout the poem, with its "dislodged," "falling," and "fleeting" leaves. Interestingly, we have a lone magnolia tree' in our front yard :) Congratulations on your win on Mile 2 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon contest. Mile 3 has already started!
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Date: 10/8/2020 5:55:00 PM
The beauty of your artistry takes my breath away, Subimal. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/16/2020 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! This is artistic, creative, delightful - brilliant! Love the poem, and I have to read it many times. Best wishes. Mala
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Date: 6/16/2020 6:45:00 PM
This is just aesthetically gorgeous Subimal. I thought I had commented on it but I don’t see my comment. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/16/2020 5:54:00 PM
A incredible write that I adore... blessings and congrats and thank you so much for entering. May you always find such a creative flow of words, Love to you, Gina
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Date: 6/12/2020 10:20:00 PM
Great beauty deserves a win, wishing it will come your way, xo
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