Whiskey and Black Nights

empty headed,
just me
and Jesus 
drinking jack,
both trying
to forget our name,
both victims of the insane.

Sitting watching,
soil turning to mud.
rotting seeds
and black roots,
we pray.
the rain it never stops.


In silence we drink,
as eternal sorrowful clouds
cries its tears,
upon the wandering souls below.

Don't come here,
looking for shelter from your sins,
or forgiveness for your failures,
our blood runs cold,
just whiskey and water
flowing in our veins,

and when the treacherous sun,
rises upon the dusty morning.
the black crows on the wire laugh.
as man crawls on his belly again today,
and Jesus kicks a beer can down the road.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/3/2016 8:29:00 AM
nice work Paul. different and fresh take on the theme. Anthony
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Date: 7/3/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Anthony for hosting competition, the Standard was very high, Very happy to be one of the winners, Paul,
Date: 7/2/2016 7:05:00 PM
Just you and Jesus....you are never alone. I enjoyed your concept of acceptance Paul. Congratulations on your win! ; )
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Date: 7/2/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thanks
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Paul Martin
Date: 7/2/2016 8:53:00 PM
For reading and commenting glad , much appreciated.
Date: 10/23/2015 5:41:00 PM
I like it!
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:14:00 PM
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