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Whiskey

Whiskey Whiskey made a fool of me exacting misery’s price and for its luster and allure left me always wanting more. Whiskey took my sins away, but briefly, they returned each day, edges sharper from exile, flames new fueled by old denial. Whiskey, promises of peace, drunken apple out of reach, calming seas by pouring oil setting stage for scathing boil. Whiskey, sad magician’s maze, comforter, or madman’s craze, searching in the shifting sand for images of shapeless man. Whiskey, warrior disarmed, closes reason with her charm dashes hopes on ragged shore leaving vanquished craving more. Whiskey made a fool of me but surely I consented. Whiskey made a fool of me but sure I was demented.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/9/2017 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, John - keep up the wonderful writing, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:21:00 AM
alcoholism deadens pain only for a while...such a compelling poem, john which deserves a great win... congrats with huggs
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:01:00 AM
Marvelous write, John, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:48:00 AM
Dear John, I believe Frederic Parker chose to write on whiskey as well. My last relationship ended because the man drank so much whiskey that he couldn't remember my name. I don't drink, but we all have our vices and addictions. Winning wishes for you in the contest!
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Date: 8/22/2014 1:26:00 AM
love that rhyme of demented with consented! this is sure a good choice for the addiction contest, that damn whiskey!!
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:24:00 PM
Great poem, havent seen alot of poems about drugs or alcohol, please take the time to read my poem, twisted senses, i could do with the feedback
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Date: 8/21/2014 12:04:00 PM
Excellent write on alcohol addiction- good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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